Reviews for Firsts
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
This is so adorable!
Sarai chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
cute!
Skimball4 chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Loved it!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
OH! Danny with a tat and that outfit ... And I like that the baby is his and he and Rachael are together.
cargumentluv chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Loved this. Thanks for sharing.
roantimothy chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
another great story, this is the side of the two that i love to feel, Linda
cytpotter chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Now that is an image that I never thought I'd see! superSEAL holding an infant! :) Great job! I loved how uncomfortable u made Steve! That was so very real to me! Loved your story! Couldn't for the life of me guess where it was going! And I love that when a writer can keep me guessing what is gonna happen next and where the story is going! ;) Great job! Thanks for the wonderful read!
francis2 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Great story of firsts. Love the POV of Steve, the confusion of it all. And then Danny in domestic bliss, wanting a tattoo to memorize it all and make a statement to his daughter. Lovely.
Nilah chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Loved it. You managed to put in a little bit of everything. And I like your world...where Danny and Rachael get back together. The Sexy Eyes part was a great touch.
Gone2Far chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Very well written. Really enjoyed it. Good action scenes and very sweet.
janie m chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
This is brilliantly written. Exciting, funny, dramatic, tender. You have both characters so well. And Steve took a bullet for Danny -how sweet is that?
lawslave chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
I agree. The show missed a chance to delve into the life of a cop with a normal family life. Why is it that all cops in shows have to be dysfunctional unqble to style down or marry people that can't deal with their careers? Loved this story and the idea of baby Joe. Thank you so much for writing this.
Synbou chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Wsll, I think Danny makes a sexy dad, too. I really enjoyed the tone of this story. It felt different. I wish they would portray more "successuf" families on TV. Maybe some out there would recognize themselves, their reality, and not feel so lost. Anyway, it was a little AU that felt very much in character. Thank you!
Cokie316 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
very sweet story. I loved it!
ackeberlynn chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Thank you for this - you are right that while Danny Angst is very satisfying, there is something very special, very endearing, about a Happy Danny. We saw it a bit before the finale, and I think for me, the great disappointment was how suddenly he was robbed of that joy. The enormity of his loss is so immense that for the writers to gloss over it would be a tragedy. I would rather they have just let Danny's character be happy.

Anyway - great story :)
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