awesome one shot

What a great one shot. you managed to squeeze all the drama of a full length story in to a few thousand words. That takes skill.
Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your dom/sub Ness and the human alpha Jake.

Wow! I really loved this story! It was great. You should right more.

How have I not read this story? It's was amazing. I loved this version of jake and ness. I love how you write the two of them.

You gotta love Nessie and Jake, even when they're wrong. But hey, fate is fate, right? At least Nessie felt terrible about it. I like that you didn't make Tucker a bad guy - that's such an easy out. Sometimes that's not how it works.

Great story - and I love this Jake! So dominant - maybe that's what Tucker was missing. lol. That and, you know, he wasn't Jacob Black.

Loved, so rare to find a fic (o / s) JXN, AH
And it's got a great rhythm, an engaging storyline. Congrats.

Love forceful Jake. He can order me around anytime he wants. Loved it!

I really enjoyed your story :0)

This was really awesome and wonderfully written.

Amazing! Amazing! AMAZING!

I absolutely adored this and how you wrote this. It was wonderfully written; I loved the tension between Nessie and Jake, plus Jake's persistence in getting one more chance. I'm a sucker for romance...and this hit the spot perfectly!

Excellent job! I haven't read too many Nessie/Jacob stories, but I can tell you, I simply loved this. So sweet.

Great job! Adding this to my favorites! :)

You write the hottest moments with Jacob!

wonderful, excellent, sexy, fun. emotional... all that good stuff! Love you!

That was pretty amazing. Not at all like I thought but soo much better. How are you so amazing with everything you write? Truly a gift that I am glad you are sharing. I know its a one shot but damn..I can't help but wanna read more lol. I seriously though she was going to wind up pregnant..which wouldve been cute..as long as its Jakes of course. But rambling, anyway such a great story and I just LOVE seeing stories by you!

Sis! I am not surprised that you knocked this fic out of the motherfucking ballpark. I am in awe! Even though I should be used to your awesomeness. Nessie's ex-fiance took the news better than I thought he would but he made the right choice... What woman in their right mind would turn away an apologetic Jacob! Not I! I'm in love with this one-shot.

I loved it! The story line was original too. Great job! (: