This was great! A truly beautiful piece of work!

See, you're scaring the hell out of me. I won't be able to sleep tonight. I'll finish this instead.

It was a bit confusing, but love the details.

Great story! I loved the depth of the plot and the detail of the reasons behind how far back the Mitchum family's Troubles went. Your characterizations were perfect, and I really enjoyed Tybalt and the rest of your OCs as well. This was a wonderfully eerie, well-written tale. Thanks for sharing! )

That was spectacular. Just spectacular. Long, plotty (whumpy) Haven fic are so dang rare making this a wonderful, edge-of-your-seat treat. Thank you so much for writing it.

Excellent story, I really enjoyed it :)

Wonderful, just wonderful. Abe was such a superb bad guy that I was cheering Nathan on to hurry and take the creep down. And might I add that it's such a treat to be able to read some Nathan H/C. I've only read two Nate whump stories and yours is one of them.

This was FANTASTIC! :)

Oh my God this was excellent! I can't wait to see how NAthan overcomes this! (he does overcome this... right? I hope so!) Please Continue! This is fantastic!

You are the first fanfic author I can honestly say who is a first-rate mystery writer. This is masterfully written and I can hardly wait for the ending!

Thanks for sharing your story. It's full of suspense and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Kat

Uh oh, Nathan's in serious trouble.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is a great story! Just the right amount of suspense and mystery. Can't wait for more.

The buildup of suspense in this story is nearly palpable. You're doing such a good job unfolding the mystery and showing us the severity of the situation, while also letting us get these glimpses into Nathan's experiences. What a terrible discovery in this latest chapter.

I honestly don't think I'm ever going to look at whistling in the same way again.

I stumbled on this just moments ago and couldn't stop reading. This is really enjoyable: well-written, chalked full of suspense and mystery, the kind of story I've been wanting to read in the Haven fandom forever.