it's hard for me to put my thoughts in order for this.
I'm a simple man, working class factory worker. I find this horrifying. I work hard and put a great deal of effort into making myself marketable, in having skills that will, God willing, see me through life. pjo has always been lighter, this is far darker and I like that. This is a interesting take on the Aphrodite cabin and I enjoy the fleshing out of things only implied in the books and think that while strange at times it is still mostly comprehensible, yet at the same time I find it a horrifying reminder of what might have been had I chosen different, had things been different.

Really hope you start posting again.

My favorite character is Katrina. She's so flawed and shows the price of beauty.

Your writing is beautiful, and stunning. The thing is Piper didn't exactly escape the stereotype. I feel like she is slowly turning to plastic in The Trials Of Apollo. Part of the reason I stopped reading them.

Beautiful, and tragic. I wish you would do some more about Piper though.

I got recced this fic and I'm so happy I read it

OH MY GODS. You are an amazing writer.

This is somehow so beautiful and poetic...

You have a gift for writing dialogue and dramatic understatements. It's like the last book of PJO: funny in some parts yet sad as heck in the others.

I loved it! This is a different idea and you pulled it off really well.

I love this story. Really, truly. This is really deep, and I love it. I would love to see more. And of course, like anyone else, the happy ending to this. I want it. But yeah, not everything in this world is fairytale, says the overused quote. But still, it kind of hurts if you ink about it. People with similar struggles actually exists. Kind of a relief if you read something similar with a happy end. Especially the realistic kind. And honestly, I'm pretty sure no one else can write it, understand it, flesh it out better than you.

Of course, I'm not pressuring. This is just a suggestion and reasons why to go with it. Plus, I kind of wanted to make it up for the real lack of reviews. I really liked the idea and the moral this story is telling: if you see lets as shallow, you're just as shallow. I enjoy that deeply.

This teaches me a lot, like by a ton. Thank you. I hope you continue, but if you decided to move on to soemthing much better and much more important to you, I'll be there too. I know I'm new, but it this is the last you wrote and you won't be updating anymore, it's been great.

Wow, I really, REALLY, need a fanfiction that fixes this RIGHT NOW or I'll die from pain.

I wouldn't mind a story about Lacy going after Fenris in Denmark it sounds interesting

Chapter 10 is by far my favourite. It's so sad and deep...

Continue this. It gave me a whole new level of understanding of the Aphrodite girls.