| Reviews for Human Inventions |
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Eli Clark chapter 3 . 2/11/2017 I hope they can befriend the survivors... not enough of those fics out there. |
Flaming Skulls chapter 3 . 8/2/2014 This is absolutely cute! I love it, Please update soon if/when you can |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/25/2014 This is hilarious looking forward to the next update |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013 Sweet troll jegus, when I read the summary I immediately thought "This sounds like a well written and sophisticated story with correct and satisfying grammar for once, I think I'll like this." So thank you for not being as gramatically handicapped as some fic writers. |
mar-iguana chapter 3 . 2/4/2012 LAWL that was cute. :3 "zombie ghost" XDD aaah i love this story. i can see the cute yaoi forming between Jack and the smoker :DD good fic, thanks for writing it :) now write more XD |
Chaerod chapter 3 . 11/29/2011 I like this story; it's fun :-3 you're good at keeping Mocha's thoughts simple, which is where most people fail while writing from the perspective of an Infected. |
ShoonatheGOAT chapter 3 . 10/25/2011 I love the whole thing. It's so funny and so . . . absolutly right! I mean, the way the infected act seems like the real deal. :( Now I'm going to feel bad when I play the game. This whole thing is brilliant. I love the development between the two. I love the all the squirrel moments, everything! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D |
Magic Toaster chapter 3 . 10/17/2011 This story is very intriguing! I can't wait for the next update :D |
al28894 chapter 3 . 10/11/2011 ** That's it. I'm DEFINATELY subscribing to this! :D |
SinfulNekoRose chapter 3 . 10/9/2011 Eeee, update! 3 Ahhh, that little Mocha is so adorable, I could just squeeze his cheeks... or his visible cheek. Lol, ghost stories. I love how his human consciousness kicks in at the best times. |
CarrotStructure chapter 3 . 10/9/2011 I would just like to say that I love this story and I think it's cute how Elis named the Spitter Mocha. :D I can't wait for the next chapter and I also can't help but wonder if 'Mocha' and Jack will ever learn how to use a gun. |
satheroth335 chapter 3 . 10/8/2011 Ghost zombie...BEST IDEA EVER |
SinfulNekoRose chapter 2 . 10/6/2011 *keyboardsmashkeyboardsmash* This... is... absolutely... ADORABLE! I love how innocent that smoker is. And those cuddles at the end of that part~ I'll be eagerly awaiting a new update! c: |
Belka Chernavka chapter 2 . 10/5/2011 Hi. I am reviewing this before you kill me. REVIEW! |
Boxed Moonlight chapter 2 . 10/1/2011 Teehee. Smoker is King of Doors. I heart this chapter as well. Keep it up! |