I am really loving this story, especially how you are weaving Jennie into The DoctorDonna's story. I can hear their voices as I read, and got a chuckle from him being afraid of Sylvia.

I just found this story., and you have hit on something that bothered me about The Doctor's Daughter. I know The Doctor doesn't like goodbyes, but not staying for Jennie's burial did not make sense, especially after what he did for the Master's funeral pyre.

Please don't make this Donna/Doctor, cause that would just be wrong.

Oh goodness! This is going to be interesting! All of them are on the cable train(?) thing! Wonder how that'll turn out?

Poor embarrassed Jenny indeed! Hahahaha!

I really enjoyed this family fun day chapter! Thank you!

333 finally!

This is so bittersweet.. I guess all points really does lead to Donna losing her memories then

It's so strange... having a whole range of emotions towards River. I feel annnoyed towards her for Jenny and Donna... I can understand where they're coming from but I also know that River is a good person and at the end of the day.. she's acting in the way that she's always been used to with the Doctor. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh goodness!

Interesting! So only Donna will be saved... I wonder if her circumstances will change because of the relationship she now has with Jenny and the Doctor..

Just sending more kudos your way! I enjoyed this chapter!

Poor Jenny:(

This is so cute and sweet. It was nice seeing that event front their own perspective.

I like how Jenny is trying to subtly push them together. Having Jenny here is really interesting.