Don't question how I can review twice, I looked back at the description and quickly realized

It's a Larvitar! (I looked it up by weight instead!)

wHAT POKEMON IS THIS?! I HAVE LOOKED ACROSS AN ENTIRE POKEMON LIST AND NOTHING MATCHES!

This is an amazing story, please update soon

Watch your tense and passive voice.

Love it! Keep it up! That is an order!
-Soldier.

I'm surprised at how calm everyone is! Plus, how did Medic know that Larvatar like to eat dirt? Do they even know what Larvatar is? Are they in the Pokemon world in this fic? Or are the Pokemon in the TF2 world

Interesting very interesting

MOAR PLEASE! You do such a good job!

engie: i need mah sleep!

Well, I still have no idea where this was going, and I'd pretty much forgotten about this. Do you have a planned plot?

"He wore a ski mask and gloves."

HE WEARS A BALACLAVA NRRRRRGH! *rips hair out*

Ahem, sorry about that. I've just seen way too many people call it a ski mask.

This story doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Does the team already know about Pokémon? They seem to be completely familiar with Larvitar instead wondering what the hell it is.

Don't get me wrong, you're a great writer! Everything is very descriptive, I especially liked how you made Larvitar get distracted. I'm just saying that the level of reaction from the team isn't quite high enough.

Wow. I'm quite impressed. You actually decided to put this chapter in the Larvitar's POV. It even got to interact with the Medic. Nice job! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I just finished MY junior year, too; of high school, by the way.

Hoo boy, looks like BLU will have a lot of trouble with a Larvitar on their hands xD

Please continue the story? I would love to read more of this.

i think blu going have trouble when this pokemon they don't know yet

I see you decided to use a larvitar. The next thing we know, there's a tyrannitar wreaking havoc in the maps of Team Fortress 2. This has only gotten interesting. I'd love to see what you have in store. Keep it up!