This was so cute! I had a bunch of emotions while reading this

This is bullshit! Why do you always make kagome seem so spineless and an easy fuck? Always needy when it comes to inuyasha?! Youre making her character so pitiful its so annoying! Too much unnecessary drama not a good story

love the story. marking as a favorite. please keep writing. :)

this chapter's so heartbreaking. :(

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LUV IT !

Loved the whole story...

Awwwww. The ending was so cute. :) Glad that Kikyo and everybody else got what they wanted. Koga was such a dick in this story. I had hoped Kagome would rip him a new one.

Oh well. Great story!

really nice story... i was almost going to cry.. *tears falling down my face* no, thats me not crying. i dont cry over stories..*my sister comes through the door, shakes her head in disappointment then leaves* hmph! let my sister think i'm emotional. its your fault. the story is too emotional.. oh, and you should make the clay pot Kikyo be sooo good. i dont like Kikyo. but still good work. *whistles and claps encouraging you to write more stories*

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nice fict

You really write well for someone as young as you are. I encourage you with this passion and to always aim to improve all the time. I have enjoyed reading this story of yours...

Hi. First of all this story is very good and interesting :D

A quick question though. I notice that other authors spell Koga the same way you do: 'Kouga'. I was just wondering is that the traditional way?

PS- Once again, amazing chapter ;)

OMG...this story was just SO amazing, I'm trying not to cry right now, you ended it perfectly, but now I'm wondering two things...is Miroku and Sango finally together officially? And are InuYasha and Kagome married and are their home that big mansion of InuYasha's? But it was just sooo amazing! I can't wait to read more from you! :D And I am writing a FanFiction of my own and I would love it if you read it, but it's your choice! Oh and I made you my favorite author and made this my favorite story! It was THAT good! I just love romance and drama and I REALLY loved this! Keep up the good work! :D Maybe if you want we can write a story together! :)

Wow. This is honestly the best fiction I have ever read. It was also one of my first fictions, so it really gave a good look to the site. All I have to say is that it was amazing, beautiful, and all the other heavenly adjectives known to man. Keep up what you're doing. You could change some lives with your writings. You defiantly changed mine.

E.G. Out! Peace!