Another great story building! Kudos to bigbow for being able to write so well. This story would be worth its own fanfic, to explain what led from chapter 6 to All I Want For Christmas - since the latter takes place later, when Amy has been happily reunited with the rest of the family :)

Omg pleassssse finish this

Given a date of the last update, it looks like this one won't be finished at all. Maybe you've left this site for good and will never read this$ I have no way of knowing. Still, I just want to say thank you for all this wonderful stories you've created and shared with us.

I hope that one day you will return to finish this story. You have created a TSCC story with original characters we care about as much as our regular heroes. I need to know what happens

I started of confused until I realised why Jessica was with Derek at the house. Excellent reveal. I think she took it pretty well

Getting of to quite an intriguing start.

I like Jess and het dad.

Cameron and John have a lot of adjusting to do. Big time.

I've noticed this story seems very short and doesn't appear to be complete. I hope this isn't a trip to nowhere.

It's one of the best things I've read about Cameron and John. The knowledge of the Cameron's dark side, which is always sitting in the background makes the story just awesome. It's such a good idea: the character development directions are much wider, almost unlimited. It makes her more complex and interesting, thrilling.

Dear bigbew, please continue your amazing story. It's brilliant. We all are looking froward to seeing it.

i can't believe these stories stopped. :(

Update! Please!

Are u ever gonna update i miss this story UPDATE! PLEASE!

U should write a new story

I love the stories and the new characters. Hope one day you get back to it. These are in my top 3 of fan fictions. Thanks for what you did do.

Dude this is a damn epic story...its almost 3 years now, is this story discontinued or forgotten?

Bitte weiter !

I've been reading through all your stories for a while now, and I must say they're some of my favorite! It's a shame you never finished this one, but at least you didn't leave us with some awful cliff hanger like the series did. Thank you for writing this; I don't know if you even check these reviews anymore, but it just felt like something I should do anyway.