Really great story, although I feel like the ending was wrong. You never finished what happens with the Volturi, leaving us wondering. Also, Bella had this whole realization that she would keep working on her relationship with her loved ones despite their disagreement over her choice to become a vampire. However, you made it seem at the end that their relationships were basically coming to an end, rather than Bella helping the Quileutes to overcome their bling prejudice. What about Emily, Bella's sister? I feel like that ended very strangely. Also, why bother letting Charlie and Renee come see Bella so physically different as a vampire if she's just going to fake her death a year later? Why not just have faked her death during the honeymoon, like the plane going down or something to prevent any questions about her obvious changes in the first place?

Another thing, Bella's abilities. You really don't explore them, which I found disappointing. Aro was so intrigued by Bella as a human, and you barely touch on that after her change. Bella in canon was a huge threat to the Volturi's power because she can prevent them from using Alec, their strongest weapon, during confrontations, which evens the playing field. Your Volturi is so much worse, so I don't understand why you didn't complete that plot line. I was also disappointed at Bella's lack of super control. I liked that about her in canon.

Anyways, great story. Thank you so much. I hope maybe one day you come back and rework the ending, tying up loose ends.

Great story. Love New Moon fics.

look who's reading this again? lol ... i needed something older and familiar. tonight a vamp fic makes me feel all cozy, it reminds me of the good times - when twilight was at its zenith and all was well in our little fic world.
love you girl.

I do like how animal blood makes Vampires have no scent to the pack. Nice thinking.

Hmm... Why does compulsion work on Bella but not gifts/talents. Plot hole?

I am glad you get right to it. We know Edward's gone to do something "heroic" and that the seperation is painful But we also know there is a alot of story to get to. its nice that we get to it and do so in a detailed manor.

This was an awesome story! Sad it’s over!

Thank you for very good read

thoroughly enjoyed this fic.
it's a shame you've no more vampward I only read vampire fics I've read most of them now. new vamp are rare now good new vamp fics are even rarer x

I dont think I've read this before. brilliant x

Thank you for sharing your words ..

love this story!
love that this story was about B&E without to much of Cullen's
love that Rosalie is non existant in this story
love that Bella was strong to tell the wolfs to let her live her life...
love your truly sexy Edward; lol

xo

This was so different from any of your other fics; the obvious vampirism and just the way in which you wrote it. Maybe it's just the subject matter, how dark it is initially, but wow you did it justice. I'm usually more into AH fics, but this may've converted me. I totally got the blue lagoon vibes. I used to love that movie as a kid and I completely forgot about it, so thanks for that ha!
-Gigi xo

Loved this story. It made me really feel what the characters were going through. I can’t believe I didn’t find this until now. I think it is one of the best reimaginings of the twilight story. Thank you for writing.

wow this was such a great story! i have prob read 100s of stories and very few really stand out of the crowd. this is such a different and really emotional storyline. I have never said this, but I truelly think this is prob better than the origional! loved it. amazing writting. thankyou

Great story thank you