Reviews for Carnival
mikkimikka chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Haruka gave them her blessing! lol This was cute
XxTealJadexX chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
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MihoTouko chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Oh this is so good! A shame I didn't find it before You write very well and TokiOto just makes me so happy...
little-miss-randomness17 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
3 Giant stuffed toys~
toganeshiro chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
why a love song, otoya? lol. i think otoya's actually trying to confess his feelings to tokiya through hints, too. lol.

arggh! really love this, so fluffy and tokiya's so cute here! also love how when tokiya's thinking about otoya, at first everything's negative, but soon turned positive and cute things about otoya!
Rinnesuke chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Oh my, a blushing Tokiya! _
numb-butt chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
What? This is only a one shot? This would be so cute as a two or three shot, but I am satisfied. It's up to the author what is best, no?

Anyways, I have to say that I really love your writing style! It just flows so well and the characterizations are rather splendid. And, the part where Nanami gets Tokiya's feelings out of him just made me sqeaul with delightment!

(I can't wait to see more from you!)
MoonLuna2009 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Yeah... so fluffy!

They make a wonderful pair!

And the thing with the puppy plushie it's so funny! :D

"It wasn't as if he need another Otoya in their room, no matter how tempting it is. Besides, the dog isn't even alive"... Ha ha ha ha! So funny! XD XD

Awesome fic, and very well writen!

Thank you very much!
Geny789 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Soooooo cute ! I meant to review this one too! Um... This story was good and I hope you write more
tomoyoharuka5 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
hello I really like your story, I don't like yaoi very much but I think that this story was actually kind of cute... hehe please continue writing... I think that you have pottential... sorry for my bad english I'm from Chile