| Reviews for Give me your pain |
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   lehur chapter 41 . 9/25/2019 shit NTR |
| lehur chapter 13 . 9/25/2019 shit, author completed shit, NTR |
| lehur chapter 12 . 9/25/2019 fucking i don't ;like this NTR, better deead author, wiht ron shit |
| lehur chapter 9 . 9/25/2019 fuck what chapter he gonna bang her |
| shapphire22 chapter 2 . 2/16/2019 I think I can understand what Draco's thought about being better than half-bloods and Muggle-borns. And that concept doesn't work w/ Voldemort who wished a domination instead of being excellent wizards like Draco said |
| shapphire22 chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 Ron was just too much! Just because you saw the Malfoys didn't know family ties doesn't mean they really don't know! Hmph... :( I really like the bond Draco and Hermione had w/ the magic :D |
| Clover1302 chapter 24 . 11/10/2018 So he has this amazing sex with her and then gets engaged and then has sex with Astoria and then is now back together with Hermione?I get that his good but I think Hermione should have respected herself a bit more. But I'll give Draco the benefit of the clearly just sees this as emotional ties yet?Just a really good physical still to be so frivolous,Just jump around like a slut. No man. And she just takes him back while he just disregards her feelings and then just fuck her and all is forgiven,nah. |
| MotekElm chapter 19 . 9/17/2018 well, I wasn't expecting that twist! |
| MotekElm chapter 16 . 9/17/2018 lovely chapter, although the grammar devolved in it. |
| MotekElm chapter 14 . 9/17/2018 the side commentsas much as I love rzzmg- in the middle of the lemons, really pulls me out of the story |
| MotekElm chapter 13 . 9/17/2018 nice story. there's a brief A/N in the middle about googling that would be good to remove to keep the flow going |
| MotekElm chapter 6 . 9/17/2018 I like the magical connection |
| MotekElm chapter 3 . 9/17/2018 nice keeping to Canon yet tweaking things |
| MotekElm chapter 2 . 9/17/2018 very nice, but there is a note to akasha the kitty in the middle of the chapter that pulls me out of the story |
| bshaoni37 chapter 1 . 7/18/2018 Okay so don't get me wrong but this story needs serious editing skills. it is a nice story but no way over 400k-word material. there are lines, portions and even events that needed to be cut down to give this story a crispy,tightly packed feature. it's just like in the movie. a director shoots about 4 or 5 hours worth of movie material but it's the job of the editor to edit and cut down parts so that the movie could be fitted under 2 hrs time Mark and also it's not unnecessarily long. |
