pleas update

Hate that their not friends anymore but want to read more excellent writing.

This is a great story so far. Keep up the great work.

:( awww that made me sad. I hope you decide to continue.

Good setup. The prologue did just what it's supposed to do, inspire curiousity about what happened. I wouldn't say it was too short.

Please continue.

I love it so far! I would offer criticism but I'm the kinda person who needs to read a little more to find out what you need to work on.