That was a seriously cruel joke. Fuck you really got me good right there.

That was shocking. After Anko talked to Naruto I thought that she would be able to turn her life around, and then you just killed her off. I really wasn’t expecting that, much less Naruto grieving her so badly. And the end with Kimiko was really good. Great writing.

I kind of liked the Naruto/Kimiko interaction. This story is pretty interesting so far.

Nice

This chapter was awesomely done :)

OH my god. You . I was so .
UGHHHH. Ok. Next chapter.

NGL I was binging this the first time and just closed the tab after hearing you restarted... I didn't find out it was a joke until months later

Did you really have to make him like the fucking snake? i was really looking forward to his encounter with Mei but you managed to fuck it up during the six tails encounter. He has no character development and i don't fucking get why he's ridiculously arrogant. you made him look like the snake, talk like the snake and act like the snake. He's worse than the snake. And you dare add "Romance" to the genre

Just read Chapter 24, was so close to abandoning the story you fucking dickhead. Well played sir

More?

Not gonna lie been reading this since about 10'oclock it's now 1:47am and I was about to fly of the handle at you about my disgust and rage about the MLP shit I have now drunk the liqour and have calmed down I will continue reading now

Whyy don't you fuck them silly? Sigh

So fucking awesome

Omfg, you had me there

I have no words to describe what I am feeling right now...