I dunno about others but I LUV THIS ONE! 3 hope for Wolf's rain season 2!

I actually really like this, it was well written and very interesting. It is on the rather sad side but that's ok :)

This is beautiful. It's a tragic ending, but it fits. I like how you captured Kiba's character - his restless search, and his lonely existence (poor Kiba, he never gets a break, does he?). There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes, mostly in the beginning, but this is very well-written overall, and it's utterly heartbreaking. I love the last line - it almost sounds like he could be crying (like the rain is a metaphor for his tears), but it's very ambiguous.

This is a tragically beautiful scene. Cheza and Kiba have one of the most tragic stories and definately the most tragic parting of any anime I have seen and this captures that so perfectly.

awww! poor kiba, all by himself with a non-answering cheza

:)

Beautiful. I see this as the ending that we never got to see.

All that's left for Kiba to do is wait.

Though there are just a few minor grammar nitpicks here and there, this was very well done overall, capturing Kiba's mood without any extra frills.