Best slash story I've read this year!

wow! so good! i want more please!

Very hot story!

Hun you write some awesome slash with my favorite couple. That was hot.

Wow, one super long hot lemon! Loved it!

oh my god. that was great! I was actually hoping that you would have done a present day (or spring 2011) of the 2 boys and jasper getting all controlling and all. that was fabulous. really hot and your writing was very good. great job and I am glad I found your one shot and got the opportunity to read your story. melissa

Short, sweet and hot as hell – it doesn’t get much better than that. Thank you for sharing. BTW I would love to read about Edward’s surprise…

Holy crap! How did I miss this little gem. Jasper was so freaking hot when he would get all dominating and talking dirty to Edward. Little did Edward know what lurked beneath that Southern boy charm and lucky us for getting to see it!

~~ Meechy

This makes me review number 17 :)

Congrats on your first ff story! Having written my first one for the last contest, I know how hard it is to put yourself out there.

Loved the Pollack reference.

I agree with Edward. Dirty Talking Jasper is always a win.

Great and beautiful story. I so loved the awesome sex. I had such good visuals. Like a porn running in my mind...thx...gr

Darlin' story;)

Thank you,

carolyn.

Here was my review from the contest-still feel the same way, hun.

Wow, that was so hot. Loved every word, so well written.

Loved it! And you noticed I said "so well written" - w/o knowing it was you? Amaaaaaazing job for your 1st time. I had no idea.

Nancy

Such a great story hun. I loved it! Definitely adding this to my faves and rec'ing this out to my readers. Jasper certainly has a dirty mouth and I love it! Quite jealous of Edward. Awesome job!

i loved this story! so incredibly hot! i love your dirty talking, demanding jasper and edward is so adorable. please say you'll continue, i'm dying to know what the surprise is!

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT SOOOO HOT! AWESOME!