this was really good I really enjoyed it

I spy a Gintama reference! ...and it's about the only one I got. *shrug*

Haha, Sokka and Toph: Detectives Extraordinaire! I like it!

Really nice. I like how you're hinting that the argument isn't as one-sided as Sokka made it sound, but also not quite as Katara made it sound, and I am genuinely interested to find out more details about it. :D

It's spelled Dai Li, I believe, but other than that I have no critiques to really make.

And, ahh, the old "married in Vegas" routine. A classic. XD

Owww, poor Sokka. Never even been through that sorta shit, but I feel fer ya all the same, buddy D:

On the other hand: yaaaay! Looks like this should be interesting. XD

(Though, honestly, one thing that's somewhat recently become a mite of a peeve for me is writers using cactus juice as an alcohol analogue, when it is obviously peyote - a powerful, real-world hallucinogen which I am fairly certain is very much illegal. It doesn't really detract from the story, though - I'm honestly just griping because I am a nitpicker about the weirdest damn things.)

I like the very descriptive actions in this story, everything including the relationship is very realistic. I'll read the sequel to find out what happens next XD. Nice story!

nice story..
i kind figure a movie for sure..
the nose thing isnt it from flyn ryder in rapunzel ? my guess..
i like the genre.. humor..
i hope sokka be with toph in the end..
thanks the story

I just finished this and I have to say I laughed so hard about people being afraid to wake Toph in the middle of the crater. Actually, I laughed quite a bit here. I think you did a good job keeping the story light even after you included angst. I actually really enjoy that aspect and I think helps keep the story emotionally relatable. You've done a great job with the action and really showed the strategical side of Sokka- I love that. On top of it all, you are a talented writer!

I'm excited to read the follow up :)

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

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I love this story, you made the whole hangover drunken idea to a whole different and amazing story! I love the way you write, especially how you can manage to write 7000 words per chapter! (This loser here can only write 1500.)
Update your sequel please, I love it. I'm waiting for your update. And like how you say it: or I'll sue ya!

Haha! That was a good ending. I like how you started the fic with the two having a platonic relationship. I'm looking forward to see how you introduce romance in here... *if* you plan it. I hope so! :P

I like the way you depicted Toph and Sokka too, very true to their characters. Toph headstrong, this should never change! I like the way they interacted with each other too. Well done!

Now, off to read more...

Well written story! Keep it up!

Well written, I think there was a bit of speech deference from the show, but nothing major, just my cdo kicking in. The plot was beautifully done and revealed in true avatar style. I like the central idea and I enjoy how you've created the chance for mini-stories while still pursuing an uderlying goal. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep Writing Space Cowboy

Love the story so far can't wait for more