This story is soo awesome. I like how you depict the completion of bond. It is really beautiful in my opinion. I already read this story for the third time. I just hope that you wont abandon this story. Thank you for writing this awesome story

Talk about a cliffhanger! Please update...I don't know if you're still alive (please be alive lol) but I really want to know what you're going to do with the rest of the story. I even went to AO3 but alas...no ending. Seriously, you have a great story here and I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next!

This is beautiful, and a perfect end. As much as I would love more chapters, leaving it as it is would be fine as well. Love the whole thing.

I love this verse, it always manages to keep you on your toes. There's just too many things happening but you do make it work. Love it! And the Cherik, I for one agree with the brotherhood.

Oh noes, what is Magneto up to? And have I mentioned how much I love Raven still being on Charles side? I absolutely love that! All the little tweaks make things amazing.

I love this! Good grief I would finish this in one day if I could, sadly duty calls.

A very interesting concept for a story, and very well done. I can't wait for the rest.

Are you going to finish this? Because it's one of my FAVORITE stories and I'm dying to see what happens next.

That was awesome you are serious awesome lol

Great story!

This is definitely one of the best Charles and Eric fanfics out there, for older readers. I absolutely LOVE this, and how original it is. The storyline is brilliant, and I love the whole Eric always comes to Charles' rescue thing. I think it's so sweet and amazingly cute! Please keep this up! I really cant wait to see what happens next!
xoxoxoxox

The last sentence was super romantic, in a dominating way 3
Building a city for their lover *squeals*
Finally, Charles submits fully to Erik, even though I am still a fan of Charles rebellious side.
*hugs* Thanks for writing this :D

Great chapter, thanks for updating

Um...I really like your story and this chapter, but b/c Charles didn't put up an actual fight the closing scene kind of lost some of its passion for me. All that a side great job and can't what for the next chapter.

love the cherik!