Reviews for The Traitor
Rebel Goddess chapter 1 . 11/11/2019
Wow, a genuinely original idea. Nicely executed too.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
Well, fuck. I don't think I've ever seen this idea before and I have no I clue how. Kudos to you!
NatNicole chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
1000 points for the originality, another 1000 for how well-written this is, & one last 1000 for the fantastic arguments (I don't mean the fight synonym, but rather the debate synonym).
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2016
Cool
VJ Riddle chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Wow - really interesting idea! Poor Peter...
attlantica chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
OH, I KNOW WHERE THIS IS GOING
AND IT'S NOT PRETTY GOOD
Although Lupin's right, they are all either death or damned
guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
Wow.
maritinkerbell chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
I love the premise behind this fic! And I enjoy this desperate, ends-justify-the-means Peter much more than the usual sniveling coward. This chapter could definitely stand alone as a one-shot, leaving the reader to fill in the blanks regarding the familiar time line, but it looks like you're planning to update it, in which case I look forward to reading more! On a constructive criticism note, it looks like you used the word "future" a couple of times when I think you meant "past" ("the childrens' safety was of secondary concern to spelling Peter to the FUTURE"; "If someone who knew a new method of time travel ever used it to go back to the FUTURE"). If it's not just a typo, then I'm confused about the meaning/context.
MrRobertsIII chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Neat!
Blueberry Babe chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Wow.
TwoRollsOfParchment chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
damn. just damn. this story is really nice and portrays peter in such a good light and now i'm starting to feel guilty about hating him coz he gave up so much to defeat voldemort. it explains a lot. and peter is really gryffindor-ish here. it's a really good, new perspective
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
sounds like a great start. I'm really excited how it's going to go :)
Lady Mage chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
This is a really interesting start to a story. Are you going to do anything more with it?
mindcandy chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Woah. I was not expecting that last bit with Remus...but yeah, this is a brilliant concept. I hope one day you decide to continue it. :)
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Wow. I love your portrayal of Peter here. This is really original and interesting. I hope you continue sometime :)
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