Hahahah I love this story so far but I wish that had captured and keep haku prisoner and later convince zabuzs to come back to the leaf after helping them defeat the Westerns and gato.

I understand that you're making a martial arts Centric fanfic, what have you forgotten entirely that Naruto has ninja YouTube as well as can you sue in his repertoire? urinal land where people can control gravity, shoot fireballs resurrect dead foes, and in general destroy the landscape and you're using real life martial arts as the be-all end-all. you started this story with Naruto saying he's going to become a clone master and perfecting the kawarimi to a point where he can go all over the place with it. why have you forgotten in this chapter that he has any of that?

Please continue it soon

Why is he terrified of the Land Lord? Did she do something to him? Cause I will gut her if she did.

so we have a Major Alex Louis Armstrong from Fullmetal Alchemist at 15 and some older saber using mf NICE love the way this is going

is it odd that I visualized naruto as a young blonde Ip man and Nai as a younger Tony Jaa? haha

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A guy named Sengo, with a sword that cut someone just from holding the handle?
Sengo MURAMASA?!

Good, hope you continue

Great fic so far. But I just think that in order to give Team 10 a tough challenge, the Westerners were shown to be too powerful in The Land of the Dusk arc

Just wanna say its a shame you've stopped writing this story I've really enjoyed reading it, it's one of the most riveting martial arts/ naruto stories I've ever read.

Please update. This is a very well written fanfic and I hate to see it not get updated after so long.

other than my initial complain..this is one of the most well written stories out there..i love how you take your time and dont rush anything..keep it up

you seem to forget that naruto is a ninja..he shouldnt be tired after doing a 2 min obstacle course...ninja literally can run for days at inhuman speeds

Well god damn, that was the first fight scene I've ever read where I was just stunned by the end of it. Sure there's stories with crazy powers that you're awed by, but this extended fight was like a movie playing in your head and it was scripted perfectly as well.
Great job

Ch 2

I wonder if he could use hornet bushin , bee clone , wasp clone, egg clone, just everything to mold. Attention if it's used hornets or wasps or bees they could be nasty surprise for the enemy but it must not be used near. Allies without something to save him if the said insects are irritated and aggressive. That means for every potenual living thing which might be used as a clone. The fire and lighting are nasty surprise in theory. The rock , stone and earth could be used for shrapnel explosive clone. Tar , maybe explosive tar to burn and slow in deactivation . Egg maybe for joke or slippery substance and who knows.