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So moving. And so painful; so sad...

... I like Angst, haha. I like your take on this episode and what might've happened when Ziva saw Tony for the first time since he got shot; I love all the emotions swirling about. It is so very 'them', I think.

That didn't really make a lot of sense, did it? XD What I mean is that you do characterization well, and I appreciate that.

Also: I LOVE the last paragraph!

~Soph

Very nice. I love how you write T/Z.

love it, well done!

I'm just going to pretend that I'm not smiling like a big idiot at my desk.

Because I totally am.

Fantastic job, Mathilde. Each story you write gets better and better. You did a terrific job of capturing Ziva's fears. I hope we see some of this on Tuesday. Poor Tony, I just want to pinch his cheeks. And run my hairs through his hair...And a whole lot of other stuff probably inappropriate to discuss.

Bravo.

I loved this! It was beautifully written. Kudos to you :)

Lovely story! This was such a fantastic episode, I'v rewatched my recording over and over! There are so many fan fic stories that could come out of that ep. I love yours

so sweet!

I really enjoyed this. I wish we could have seen something like this in the episode.

This was really good. I liked it a lot

This is lovely; it's sentimental without going overboard or out of character. 9x01 could have done with a small scene like this one.

Yep, I think they could have just added this scene to the ending of the premiere and we'd all be happy! I loved this, it was so them, without going overboard. Well done:)

Lovely - I wish they'd added this scene to the episode!