dammit, i went to read the next chapter and surprised myself. didn't even realize that it was unfinished, I read the whole thing in a day! (feb 2018)

Love you story, the plot is sad, but juicy.

I don’t think padme should of forgave anakin so easily despite what qui-gon said, I know she doesn’t completely forgive him when they make up but really she should of made him suffer longer then he does.

Keep up the great work

Great story hope you continue it one day

this is an amazing story. I hope you update it soon.

Are u dead? Please update!

Have been reading your story.
It is fantastic!
When will post next update?
Please

Please update
This story is amazing

Just a suggestion, I feel like a better excuse for why you can't kill Palpatine right now might be because Anakin, Obi-Wan, Padme all know who the Sith Master and Apprentice is. Killing Sidious now means Dooku will probably take on a new apprentice that the Jedi could probably never find out who it is and mean the Sith will secretly continue, if that makes any sense.

I was wondering when you will update this story?
I luv it and I am anxious to know what will happen
Please

Hi I was wondering when you are going to update. This is an amazing story and I would love to see what is going to happen.
Please continue. It would be a shame if it was discontinued.
Forever your fan

Please update

Please Update!

Yes, Windu is a horrible condition, hehehe :D
I love Padme, but more Obi-Wan and Anakin next, please?
Great chapter, please update soon.

Obi-Wan’s and Anakin’s conversation after the meeting was very well written, I just had to smile. They were both so them :) But I have a very bad feeling about it all. Mission, Padme being in danger, relationship between Obi-Wan and Anakin almost as it was in the previous timeline. It's like all the pieces are falling into the same place, creating circumstances that could produce similar, if not the same, results as in the previous timeline. And this small suggestion at the beginning (I love how you build tension in this story, it's briliant!). Last time Anakin cut Windu’s hand and caused Mace's death to protect Padme. Will Windu get carried away in his mission, causing the same outcome again? Aaaaaah, I am so nervous now!

I started to wonder about something. Will Anakin meet someone, whom he knew as a Sith, but that person doesn’t know him yet in this timeline? I just thought it might be interesting to read if he meet, lets say, Tarkin. I would laugh ;P

What did Cad Bane do to R2D2?! And really, Cad Bane is an idiot. He drugged and stun shoot a pregnant woman! I just hope nothing will happen to children, because otherwise I am sure we will see Vader again and there will be a slaughter.
Something tells me that Sidious won’t pay Cad Bane once all is done, but kill him instead.

Padme’s awakening and panic is very well written. Her thoughts brought back the memory of Sola’s words – no one else to blame, if something happens to her children now. But of course, Padme wouldn’t be Padme if she stayed on Naboo. At least she will be at the same location where Anakin is heading. Still I have a very bad feeling about it. Why Sidious wants her there?
Actually, maybe Anakin should take Padme to the Temple once the matter at Invisible Hand is solved? After all, shocking the masters once again with having a pregnant wife wouldn’t be so bad now :D
And I just knew that Padme's stubbornness to keep her relationship with Anakin and her pregnancy a secret from public will come back to bite her. After all, that's what secrets do.

And a cliffhanger. You are purposely torturing us ;P Very intense chapter. Can't wait for the next!

Very very very GOOD