Hello! I'm a new reader of your story from Portugal, so, don't ind my possible grammar errors, ok? (thank God you aren't Arthur XD)
Well, your story is really cool! I love the way you write: simple to understand and clear! I had read lots of fanfics, and this was the first one that I didn't had to search the meaning of a word! And don't worry, that's a good think! I think that even people ho talk English sometimes get confuse with some stories phrases...
Backing to your awesome fanfic! Alfred is such a troublemaker... Poor Arthur... And its the first time that I read a fanfic wherein Canada isn't a forever-forgetful of life. I always forget the name of Artie's big bros... And when I remember, I don't know ho is ho! But I love them, I love to see our dear England pissed off. And there were so many bloody yaoi scenes (my favorite was that one on Christmas, at two of fuck in the morning), and they aren't together yet?! Jeez, it even exist a PruCan couple now, and they're with the "I'm not gay" "You'll get in trouble with my bros" "I want to leave the school and I don't care about you" "I wont say sorry and I was angry that time"... I want to become a char of the story just to slap them!
By the way, I just have one question: why don't you put China and Russia in the story? And Spain to, because of the Bad Friends?
Hope you continue it! By, and Happy New Year!

Well...it doesn't snow in the part of California where I live...we get sunshine. And earthquakes. And maybe frost in the winter if it gets cold enough.

Canadian Smarties...are chocolate.
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Must find.

I think...I remember reading about a Commonwealth...nah. My schools never taught me that.

(Random nowadays defense)
We have Miley Cyrus twerking to defend us.

PANCAKE! :D

These facts about Canada are interesting...

Whaii stop whaii I just fell in love with your story noooooooooo fairrrrrrrrrrrr *sobs*

Wow. Alfred is fucked up.

No Alfie you cant leave Arthur i wont allow it

this is great so far hope the nexts one is up soon :)

I'm going to frickin cry.

Why.

Why do you do this to me.

aw, alfred is finally kicked out :(

Wtf wft wft wft wft wft wft wft wft wft wft wft you update soon

O_O Well damn. Th-This chapter...It's rather...Climactic. And dramatic. In a completely good way. Suicidal Matt is suicidal. Aggressive possesive Al is agressive. And possesive. Also, most of my friends cut themselves and are all suicide-y and shit. It gets irritating after a while of hearing the problems of people who cry about the same shit over and over, doesn't it? School fights Better than television. Just saying.

Mo-Mo

Fffffffuuuuuuuaaaaa.

Alfred's so badass in this story... Somehow I like it but somehow I don't. D:?

This is awesome! :D