| Reviews for Poison Arrow |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2017 Love it |
pinksugarrush chapter 1 . 5/17/2015 I enjoyed it. :) |
NorthernMage chapter 1 . 3/8/2015 Wait...so Thor dropped Loki? He was left for dead on Jotunheim? |
jay5merlin chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 This made me giggle at the end. Your prose is beautiful, I congratulate you most heartily :D |
Wolfnight2012 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012 Okay, wow... awesome! How can something so short be so incredibally well done? I love this! Even not knowing what is happening, or why, even not knowing if this is before Thor, after The Avengers, or in between, it still captured my complete attention! This is very well written, I love the comparissions between Loki's thoughts, and Thors thoughts! [As well as Loki's essay-length ponderings and Thor's two sentences. Loki manages to come off complex, even within 800something words. He clearly wants to be closer to his brother, yet fights the emotion and need as if its weakening poison. And of course, Thor is just a great and over-protective brother, who is more than a bit clueless. |
YouThereintheTrunks chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 As with poisonous frogs, big things come in small packages. You depicted Loki's contradicting thoughts very well. Wanting the safety of Thor and wanting his independence of Thor. Beautifully captured. I am glad I discovered this gem. |
xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 1 . 6/23/2012 Ah! Yes, good c: This was very intense for how short it was Lovely! |
ImLostForever chapter 1 . 4/4/2012 Loved it. |
Qille chapter 1 . 1/16/2012 Aww, brotherly love. We don't see enough of that in the movie. This was a very good story! Great job! Love the use of poison _ |
roxypony chapter 1 . 1/14/2012 So, profoundly, excellently, thoughtfully, stunningly written! *smashes laptop* ANOTHER! RXP |
HowlynMad chapter 1 . 12/6/2011 I really hope to see a little of this attitude by Thor in the Avengers. That one little scene with Nick Fury asking him what he's willing to do... gives me hope for the brothers. Well done! |
Bookwyrm chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 Your writing is so amazing. You manage to capture a thousand different emotions and still come out with a perfectly understandable story that takes you right into the minds of the characters. Good job! |
AnjuraAmatrava chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 A very meaningful story and really touching (: |
Awesomecuz chapter 1 . 9/29/2011 Bwahahaha! Loki thinks... (paragraphs follow) Thor thinks... (two lines follow) AHHH! ;P |
L. C. Brotherton chapter 1 . 9/27/2011 This was superbly descriptive! With an incredible economy of words, you've dropped us into the midst of the fray. Well done! |