Wonderful! I got lost a couple times, mostly dialogue and sudden scene changes. But enjoyed.

so fucking vute

Right this was pretty good, there were, as you say some very awkward sounding bits and there were times where I thought 'where is s/he going with this?' but overall I enjoyed it so nice one!

Think my favourite scenes were John shouting out 'because I love you' and Sherlock realising that John thought he was being deliberately cruel, and the scene where Mycroft drops his mask and beams at John just before the pair get married.

Lots of banter, ups and downs and good usage of Lestrade. Cheers :)

I loved the whole story it was so cute and the game was genius :)

Please keep writing

That was such a cute story. I loved the back and forth of John's and Sherlock's feelings. There were a lot of unexpected twists. And there was fluffy fluffness galore :)

Excellent chapter. I totally did NOT see that coming at all. I loved how you built that up since the beginning but the readers would never have expected the twist. Oh, I hope John comes back, or Sherlock finds him soon.

Oh my gosh, Sherlock is so freaking adorable when he has a fever hehe. I can't believe he asked John to marry him too, and of course he was probably completely serious but John doesn't know that, poor Sherlock. Poor John. :)

That was a cute one.

Really? I thought it was cute and hilarious and romantic and a whole slew of other adjectives.

Great story, I liked it :)

Thank you !

Seriously. You should of carried this on. I've been obsessed with this for the best part of three days. Reading every chance I got! Even in class under the desk on my phone. GAH Thanks :D

One thing you might want to rewrite was the part at Scotland Yard where John was pulled aside by a call for a doctor. That was a bit odd. I liked the overall story though. I couldn't walk away.

It sounds like you've got a Sherlock roommate of your own.

Good for John. I was worried they were actually going to get married for the game.

I look forward to re-reading this story, but I also love it the way it is. I hope you don't plan on re-writing it in script format. I just can't seem to get into those type of stories.