Wowwwwwwww that was so good I ️️ It

Loved this~ Thanks for writing it!

found this recently while digging through fic recs on someone's old tumblr blog. i have to say, i really enjoyed reading this. the development both cloud and genesis were going through as this whole training session evolved from wanting to win a bet to actual friendship between the two...got me crying over here

this is a really old fic and i dont really expect this review to be seen, but thank you for writing this fic and sharing it!

That was awesome!

Every now and then I come back and read this story, and it's still as amazing as the first time. Thank you for being such an amazing writer.

Hi, I just finished to read your story and it was a really nice story. I almost cried at Cloud and Genesis hug. Besides this, I'm currently learning English and read in that language is really helpful for me especially when I'm interested in the writing.
Have courage for your work. I'll make sure to read your other fanfic since I love your style of writing.

I've only read the first chapter but it's promising so far. You do have a rather amusing error in the first paragraph of day 1. It looks like you were going back and forth between two possible phrases and forget to settle on one. "It was only a matter of time before he got kicked out of was thrown out of the program." Sorry if this bothers you but I would want it pointed out in my story.

I love the names you chose for this chapter - Jadak, Zol, and Yuza. I bet they miss their Mother, J.E. Avon.

This was excellently done, 10/10. I was absolutely amazed by the dynamic characterizations and the story progression. I found the interactions between Cloud and Genesis to be particularly well thought out. I also enjoyed the three brothers (though admittedly not at first); they grew on me.

I’ve decided to make a compilation of FFVII FFN fanfics that aren’t on AO3 to share with others, and I’d like to include this one. If you’d rather I not share this please tell me. If you’d like more information and or the link when I finally publish the list please inform me. Otherwise, thank you for making such a wonderful contribution to the FFVII fandom! I hope that sharing this with others will gain you more readers!

THis was adorable and I love it! The writing and progression in characterization was done really well! Absolutely phenomenal!

This was awesome!

I just finished and it was. Beautiful, and now I’m going to look up your other stories if there half as good as this one I think I will definitely enjoy them. Thank you for the fantastic read XD

DAMNNNN! I love that ending, I nearly cried myself. You're so amazing, This is so amazing. I love this so muchhhhh

Cool having the other FF Characters as cadets here!

You know... All I can say is, you have a great mind and is a damn amazing writer. Those training exercises I assume you came up with is accurate, I couldnt even think of those at all especially the baseball one. You're so cool.