I love this so much! The length of the stiry made it all the better, and I loved the whole “redemption” arc.

I was thinking about the ending why not have the Master get rid of the weeping angels so he never go's to the 70s and does not meet the other him and not change much so the other Master does not go insane but I give you a 9.5/10 for your ending

That was AMAZING. Took me forever to read but I'm glad I did. You have a very good writing style and I really want to know how long it took you to write one chapter. Thank you for writing this and drawing all the art pieces to go with it.

This story was brilliant, and I loved nearly everything about it! You are an amazing writer and how you handled the Master's character was sheer genius. I do regret to say that I was hooked until the third chapter, being that I'm not the biggest fan of 11, it was a little hard to get through. While the pacing was good in the first and second chapters, the last two just seemed forced and too action oriented for my liking. I was a little put off with the third chapter and all the jumping around, but I think you ended the whole story brilliantly.

Ok, i'm really just here to tell you how epic this one is... A story to "What would happen if the Master would have come with him and how would that have changed the story?" and you pulled it off absolutelly beautiful... I cried at the same parts as i did in the original and i laughed a lot more often, especially at the many inputs off the Master...
I found myself marveling quite often, that i would love to take your story as canon, because it's so goddamn great... I still can't believe how perfect you pulled the Transition between ten and eleven because i myself have troubles in seeing the two of them togeter (11&Simm) and i'm a hardcore shipper of Doctor/Master... And don't even get me started on the parrallel universe... that story arc was just so... i can't even describe my feeling for that one... most of the times i didn't know if i should rather laugh or cry until i didn't know what i was currently doing and why... (crying because it's so beautiful, laughing because it's so tragic, doing neither or doing both?)
And the End was the greatest i could imagine... anything more would destroy it, as of right now it is perfect as it is... the sherlock holmes interludes were both so absolutely wonderful that i am curently really thinking of giving superwholock another chance (but i don't want any Destiel in the tardis...)
okay i think i have said what i have to say and i want to tell you that i will be on lookout for your name (maybe you will write another great story; who knows?) and i would love to know your opinion on how the AU would have turned out diferently if the Master would have let Rose live, the Doctor would fall in love with both and they had to fight over him (as i strongly love jealousy-stories, where everybody is at everybodies throat...) Also i loved how you solved it for River, the poor girl, even if i think i missed something, because later or rather in the beginning she must hate the master, because he married her love... wouldn't she?

I truly enjoyed reading this story! It was very clever how you wove the Master into the Doctor's adventures with his companions while also changing how things went. That was very nicely done!

Whelp, it was a long time since I last read this story and I went back and forth with deciding if I wanted to continue. The Torchwood crossovers weren't for me and never were the Shrelock Homies one but this story gave me a unique perspective I heavily found myself coming back to read for. I like the premise for it and with it following canon except for the Master bit and probably my favorite part was the one with Girld Who Waited as though the connects that I hoped to gather from this story's perspective were fairly well demonstrated between future Amy and the Master. With Netflicks having Doctor Who I found myself rewatching and reimagining the story and that's what really brought me back to the story. The story was weaker around some of the characters emotions and development with me personally feeling as though the Master, our struggling and sexy protanginst, didn't really become the person we as readers set out for him to be and that was shown well in the Crossovers. However the part based on The Girl Who Waited more than showed the potential of this story. It was good if not great but not set to reach my expectations of character development and Master related additives in the cannon. It was a good drama and the uniqueness drove me to finish it. I feel as it was a successful drama but not what I'm looking for in this type of story. I really did like that take on the episode as well as the later infractions of the Master and 11 Doctor. If you want to contact me my account is PhoenixLord05 YOSHI!

This whole story was amazing! No mre chapters needed! It was perfectly written and who ever made this give themselves a pat on the back!

too bad im only up to season 5 lol

This story was interesting at first but after a while it just felt like "And they did this ... And they did that."
I was also a little thrown / put off by the Sherlock and John coming into it. It just seems completely out of place and a little bland. There's too much action and scattered episodes -and some spelling errors -that just make this a bit jarring to get through.

I just read the first chapter but it was good, I liked the sherlock's part, it made me laugh. Thank you :-)

First of all, THANK YOU LOADS for writing this. This wonderful ride which flung me in all directions, broke my heart, filled me with joy and basically, feels. The first three chapters were just so right. Misadventuring and D/M development; and I just fell in love with Eleven and the Master, even though originally I was more of a Ten/Master fan. But essentially, it was beautiful. An amazing season rewrite with the Master, Doctor and Ponds. (character development ftw!)
But then ahh, you just had to break my heart with the last chapter, which was so sad and melancholic but very well written (of course). The Master with a different Doctor without their fondest memories just nags at me and I'll admit reading it felt uncomfortable, hahaa :) but YES in the end there is a BLOODY WONDERFUL REUNION and yes I'm so happy you wrote this. Happy ending, thank you so very much. Intense and dynamic. *hints not-so-subtly* Sequel?

But as you see... I have long since figured out a way around the "1 review" rule... xD Heehee
Ah dunno whai baht dis fic iz GOLD :P ...wow never writing like that again ever. :P

"And no more genocide."
"Darn."
They're so funny together! Disastrous and funny... xD
It's just mindblowing to think about how those few years in the parallel dimension where the master messed around with EVERYTHING are just a teeny snippet of their time together, past AND future... xD They're in for a hugely bumpy ride! xD
This story is like a whirlwind! I swear... xD I got picked up, flung around, and hurled back down, and all the while being just like "AAHHHHHHH WOW SO GOOD BUT PAINFUL AND I CAN'T AAAAAHHHHHHH" xD xD xD hahahahaha! xD

Aargh! He's soooo frustrating, but I just keep reading because it's so good... I don't know what to dooooooo xD xD hahaha!
2nd time checking this out, and I keep getting a headache and heartache from being frustrated with the master, and he just won't stop pushing, but that's just who he is and i love how you've made him in this story, and I kind of can't deal with the feels right now, but yet I still keep reading and loving it because it's just so damn good and... and... aaaaaaahhhhhhhh xD xD

Congradulations, you've successfully made me freak out on myself and have an internal continueordon'tcontinueaarghthefeelsidon'tknowhowtodealwiththis contradiction over a fanfiction! xD xD aaahhhhhhhhhhhh xD hahaha! xD