Reviews for My Brother!
JacksomAiken chapter 21 . 7/29
I don't think magic could be analysed in the form of mathematic as the original HP series stress that it is the intention that matter most and that magic is to be feel inside to be honest , it is a brilliant idea to write about the Potters' research in this maybe the magical intention could indeed be decoded in math!
iliketoreadfremione chapter 42 . 7/30
pls update
Guest chapter 42 . 7/13
Great story and very excited to have read the new chapter, I hope the next one comes out soon! Keep up the great work!
GabiSantos chapter 42 . 7/11
Thank you for the awesome story. Can't wait to read more
PrincessCecelia chapter 42 . 7/13
I love this! I hope you continue to post:)
obvsHiNnY chapter 1 . 7/11
longest book yet lets go !
obvsHiNnY chapter 1 . 7/11
hmmm 500k words thats quite... long
Guest chapter 41 . 6/25
Great story, keep it up!
awebster10 chapter 42 . 6/25
As bad as it seem- and unless your already doing this- but when the 3rd task comes have it play the same way but obviously different due to Harry’s experience. Still let Cedric die and Harry see his parents as it’s a big part in his character development. In ootp it would be good if he was still neglected in the summer(maybe even sister leave- not likely) but don’t have Emma see the visions aswell as it would hinder the impact it would have on Harry in this year
These are just my views but it’s your story obviously
Jeda31 chapter 42 . 6/23
Have to say that at having binge read this entire gorgeously awesome and fantastic glorious epic story epic f yours in order to reacquaint myself with it before reading the most recent updated chapters. That it is one of the best HP fics that I have read in a long while and you do an awesome job of crafty of an unique exquisite plot line merged and matched together existing plot lines and your own flawlessly to create an absolutely humdinger of a diverse and different story.

Have to say that I thing you let Ron snd Hermione off too easy in regards to Harry forgiving them for stabbing him in the back, but maybe that is just me. Though great to see that you got their reasoning for doing so spot on as jealousy of his achievements, both fame and academic wise making them feel inadequate is just so Ron and Hermione in that regard. Though it is brilliant to see them finally friends again and back on an even keel given the dark storm coking their way soon.

Oh my god, I didn’t think you could surpass the awesomely sublime and magician kickass power and skill that Harry showed in the first task, but you made me eat my own works and then some. As his use of the runes and patronia to create the worlds first wizarding sub to rescue not just his his races and Fluer’s was an inspired stifle if genius and allowed Harry to further show just how far he come as a wizard ️ I n the last year.

Very curious to find out eventually whom Crouch Jr is possessing as although it could still be moody doubt it as think it is a red herring, have no clue as to it maybe or if he is there at all.

Eagerly looking forward to the resolution of the court case and the reveal of the guild as the authors of it as ministry and wizarding works will be shocked, as mazes and appalled at these young go getters winning and starting a change of their society for the better.

Have to say utterly loving the romantically beautiful and gorgeously lovely nature and love of the potter’s romantic relationships are and how they are processing at their own natural and destined pace. As well as how well you had the gang with the aid of the mischievous twins payback all of those creepy perverted fir coming onto poor Emma as they deserved everything they got.

Plus found that meeting between the Potter’s and Laurence’s at the end to be brilliantly cathartic for all concerned and intriguing adding more to the mystery of the elemental patronous that I cannot wait to see solved. As well as delicious vibe of foreboding regarding conversation of what may happen if Harry uses said power for the wrong reasons even in a life threatening situation.
always a doe chapter 7 . 6/19
i am loveing it i am reading at 10 pm is aus
MakoDave chapter 33 . 6/20
Well my son actually suggested your FanFiction and I am enjoying this story so very much. Thank you for sharing this and I love the story lines you have created.
kerana chapter 28 . 6/17
pls let em and SOME GOOD GUY get together.
kerana chapter 27 . 6/17
in short, bad things will happen to our beloved emma.
kerana chapter 26 . 6/17
luville? nuna?MUST FIND SHIP NAME!
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