Thanks for another update.

I think this chapter was more narrative than the others. If I remember correctly Alec was a cocaine addict, and his marriage could be one of many reasons why he fell again into that.

I recommend you not to separate the phrases if they go in the same paragraph, there's no reason to do it.

This just blows my mind. It's so epurate and so soft. And I really like it.

This is written so smoothly and well. Simple touching and easy dialogues; it sounds so poetic. Very nice captured, these two. Plus the last sentence was a great ending for this chapter. :)

Wow! I don't know how you do it. They say a picture paints a thousand words and you, with much less words, paint such a beautiful picture. Both chapters so far have been so heavy with a kind of sadness for me but also hope. I love my Callian and I LOVE how you write them!

Ahh, this was so poignant. Very well-written. Loved how the scar became a symbol of their friendship and ultimately a reminder of it for Cal.

Omg I am so happy to see this and so soon! I'm glad you decided to come back and I am even more glad that you did it so quickly lol. This is such a powerful story and in so few words. I liked the bit at the end with the scissors :) And this: "Sometimes when he looked at the elongated scar on his palm, he believed to still feel her heartbeat there." Wow. That's all I can say. Beautiful story, beautiful words. I know I said it before but I'll say it again - I'm so happy you came back!