Love it! Please write more

Wonderful, simply flawless. I wish this was more than a 1 shot, because I don't know why this subject hasn't been done on this site, (in a good way that is). I wish you would take this subject and run with it.

I can't really describe how beautifully written this is. Raw emotion, love, hurt, all displayed perfectly. It was really really good. I just can't get enough of your work. Outstanding.

amazing. you are a beautiful writer, i would love to see your take on a multi chapter like this. regardless though, amazing!

Constructive criticism? Sorry to disappoint you, but there is none.

Sometimes, actually a lot of times, when I read fan fiction, I skim through some parts or even skip them, because I want to get to the interesting stuff, the things that make me feel something. But with this, with your writing, I want to read every single word.

And honestly, I don't know how you do it. I am so utterly impressed. The part that I almost always skip is the part about background, if there is one, or the parts that describe the scene (the sun shines through the window etc). But I can't skip anything of this. Not one single part can I skip, not one single sentence. It's all important, it's all pulling at my heart strings.

Your writing makes me totally giddy. I am trying to read all your Calzona fics slowly so the time when I've read everything and there's nothing left won't be here so soon. Because I simply don't want it to end.

No fan fic has ever made me feel like this before.

I am in love with your writing.

Wow, fantastic story. I loved how Callie steped up for Arizona. The love Callie had for Arizona was so evident. I can so relate to how Arizona had a hard time asking for help.

You've written a great story. Good Job !

Your grasp of Arizona and her cognitive processing style (and the challenges inherent in being in a relationship with two entirely different processing styles) is just outstanding. I can feel their frustration here as Arizona tries to share in a way that Callie will understand, and Callie tries to grasp what Arizona can't quite say. Perfectly done.

*adds to favourites*

This is really good. Reminds me off the one story on here where she was attacked

Terribly sad but my god amazingly beautifully written. So honest and raw and powerful! Amazing and I mean truly an amazing piece of work. I don't generally do angst like this but this was so much more than that. It was really really good! I know it was a one shot but I have to ask was she raped or just assaulted? Would you consider writing more after this on this one-shot, and it takes a lot for me to like Callie but in this I felt her love and concern for Arizona rolling off her so well done to you!

Amazing

Freakin' awesome!

Brilliant story

Awesome

One Word WOW! That was amazing. Congrats on an amazing story