Woah, that was just... WOW! ~

Seems a bit rushed to me. Other than that, it was very good. Although, you did misspell Sebastian's name several times.

You dirty, dirty girl.

it was a little rushed as if you were losing it

There reads 'Sebastien' in some part near the end.

Otherwise it was good

It was really good but u spelled sebastian wrong...ALOT!

nice X)

Sebby-chan is to pretty to be a pedophile ;D

Aww XD Sebastian had good persuading skills XD

love it nice job on this its good that u didnt just jump into the sex then it wouldnt have been entertaining i like how u made the mood gradually come up to it good job

i will aways love good ciel/sebastian smut!good job!