So I read all of it but I was just too lazy accidentally to leave this review chapter 27 anyway really looking forward to some more please update soon loving where this is going great story

Hey man. This is one of the most original Crossover I have read on my favourite franchises.

Dude great story one of the best crossovers I've seen

dead?

It was a great story until Cerberus was included (only a completely incompetent intelligence structure (not something that exists in the Halo verse) could allow the group to go undetected for any length of time.

Second, there was no response to the act of war perpetrated by the Salarians and Turians? None of the Halo verse people would let that go, they would all realize that ignoring it would just worsen the situation... letting an obvious and declared enemy operate freely is worse than stupid.

I hope the story hasn't been abandoned and can recover, but I do have significant doubt.

An exciting and original take

Rampant not rampart :P

I'm liking the story so far, but your really need to put a page break in whenever you change scenes. It's extremely confusing to be aboard the Forerunner Keyship one second and the next having Turians spouting prideful nonsense with absolutely no indicator that the scene has changed.

I'm sorry I just can't see why Eezo would be a source for the halo array. If that was the case then everyone in the mass effect universe should have advanced greatly with the mineral. Even if you explain it to me, I shall say that if Eezo had been around the forerunners then it would have likely made them like the protheans.

the turians done did fuck up and woke the giant that is the UNSC

mass effect ships can't plot jumps into anything, the computers won't let them, the reapers put them there... your story tho... so good job. but why did they do it? don't they normally take stations, and I don't think they had any reason to think it had a mac cannon...

Looking forward to seeing the Turians and Salarians get their asses kicked!

Good chapter.
Keep it up. Laters.

Interesting story so far. I haven't read a fic yet where one of the Citadel Races gets betrayed, so I have to say its an interesting turn of events. Keep up the good work.

Love you're story. Only thing I can think of that needs to be improved upon is to 'clean' up your paragraphs a little, spacing them out some so that way it's easier to keep up with what's going on. Other than that, it's a great story.

Side note, I'm writing a Halo/ME story myself and would love to have some feedback from you on how it's doing, maybe get a beta reader for it. Likes, Dislikes, etc. Hit me up if you're interested! :D

-Azores