| Reviews for The Flame That Burns |
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Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2019 Omg that’s getting so good. When will you update again? I really am getting into this. |
k.k.singh3450 chapter 11 . 11/20/2017 Nooo!The story was getting so good! They finally had a connection./ (;;)/ |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/11/2017 Sad too see that you have probably given up on writing this story or fanfiction all together. I still come back to read this once in a while because its a very intressting story. But I have given up on it updating. |
Guest chapter 11 . 12/14/2016 Nooooo! Please, please update! You can't leave me like this! |
Kris Senju chapter 11 . 11/10/2015 nooo come on. zuko help the avatar dont kill him katarra you bitch. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/11/2015 The whole time with this chapter I thought about when spongebob bet his soul for Mr. Krabs and took 62 cents instead. Then squidward was like: "WTF?!" don't know why I thought of it but it just came to me. |
iLOVEit chapter 11 . 5/2/2015 hey can you pleeeaaasssseeeeeee update? i really love this story sooo pleaaaassssssssseeeeeeeee write a new chapter *-* |
Maya1109 chapter 11 . 4/19/2015 I'm really glad You've decided to continue with this story. Its really is a good quality fic, the writing, style, grammar and actual plot really flow well and I haven't picked up any errors which is really nice. I also have compliment you on how well your characterization of Zuko and Sokka has been. I look forward to your next chapter. Happy writing! :D |
Hily-chan chapter 11 . 3/1/2015 I love your story ! All of it ! The tension between Sokka and Zuko is JUST like I imagined it, and the way you've put it in the main storyline is wonderful. You are a brilliant writer, keep on like that ! I can't wait to read the next chapters ! Thank you very much for this fanfiction, Hily-chan |
2 lazy to log in chapter 11 . 1/15/2015 Surprised and delighted by this new development in the story (Katara ftw) and just that this was an actual update, yay! Anyway, happy new year and happy writing! |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/14/2015 i want more update soon plz! ...also, you said sokka is 2 years younger than zuko, but he is only one year younger (also, so is mae). aang is 12, katara, azula and tai lee are 14, sokka and mae are 15, zuko is 16. |
guest chapter 11 . 1/13/2015 Oh no! Why did Katara do that? You don't just hit the fire prince like a dummy. Great now were all gonna die. Where's Iroh?! |
SnowKissYuki chapter 11 . 1/12/2015 And I thought I'd never see the day I'd be continuing to read this story. Thanks for bringing back memories. |
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 11 . 1/11/2015 When i saw this updated I will admit part of me hoped it was a chapter not an Author's Note saying its discontinued (belive me its common, sadly enough). And when I reread the whole story I was so excited that you haven't abandon this epic story. :D I don't think Zuko knows that Sokka is the prince of the southern water tribe. Its not like Sokka told them his father is a Chief (I betcha Iroh knows or suspects). Plus I don't think the South has the same standard of royalty like the North does; because if they did then wouldn't Sokka have a chance on Yue's hand in marriage and such in canon? He would have been a better choice for a son-in-law than that douche that failed very miserably to kill Zhoe/Iroh in that one episode. As well I always figured partly Sokka being bitter towards his sister in the first book besides her being a bender it may because she is a bender, people at the village would think or want her to be the next in line after their father being Chief. That would be something that Sokka & Zuko have in common (Ozai wants Azula to be Fire Lord after him not Zuko; the other difference is Hakoda is a better father). Can't wait for Zuko and Sokka later to have sword lessons to each other. Because I would think Zuko would want Sokka to know how to properly defend himself in a fight (plus peace of mind for Zuko knowing that Sokka could take care of himself then him worrying about him during a battle or whatever). As well if it happens; Sokka maybe being captured by the Southern Water Tribe warriors and Hakoda meeting him in a tent to "talk" to the fire nation dude and being like "wtf sokka?!" oh that would turn out bad...people would think Sokka is a traitor... oh such drama. Now about this chapter you cruelly ended in a cliffhanger. :P The only thing I'm curious is why Katara hasn't realized her brother is basically wearing Zuko's clothes (I figured Sokka is wearing Zuko's clothes because they are the same age and size & plus I would think Iroh would have gotten him to do wear them not any of the crew's extra outfits). Because why would her brother not be wearing his normal southern water tribe clothes if he followed her, as i figured that is why he is there in the island. And of course I don't blame Katara attacking Zuko. But seriously how is Sokka going to get them NOT to kill each other? And ooh, I super can't wait for Sokka to be in the middle of Katara and Zuko both telling him to come with them. Who will he choose? :P Awesome chapter! |
Fox in the Rough chapter 11 . 1/10/2015 Wow it's been a while huh :) hope everything is going well on your end! Awesome update and I can't wait for more! XD |