| Reviews for Seven Days To Never Give Up |
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RedCeleste chapter 8 . 12/1/2015 OMG thanks for both endings. I prefer the one where Hayato lived but both were epic! thanks for the wriitng |
StargazerLament chapter 8 . 11/13/2013 I did! I cried! THE FEELS! WHY! TTATT *sniff sniff* |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 9 . 1/17/2013 Oh god... The children mad at me... the children snapped! The children of YamaGoku(of mine) finally snapped because WHY I ALWAYS FOUND HURT/COMFORT FIC WHEN THEIR 'MOTHER' WAS THE ONE WHO GET HURT AND IN HOSPITAL?! *snapped as well* The heck- why you had alternate Ending?! (;A;) *hit the bed over and over* As long as they're together forever! (TT-TT) How cruel... |
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2012 Dang, stupid internet won't let me log in! This is Shaariin13, by the way, and I LUFF 8059! Yeah, I have an ongoing series about them right now, and yeah, I love your fics! Especially His Still Beating Heart. I swear, anytime I need a Tragedy/Angst fix, I whip out my phone and look for it, haha! Yeah, soooo, I guess just be conscious where to put some commas, cause I saw some places that are lacking. And too much white space, I guess, although I see the point why it was written that way (remembers how Takano raved in Sekaiichi Hatsukoi about the maiden's page blah (spin off to Junjo Romantica)) Okay, this is way out of hand now. Keep on writing! |
KuroKokoro13 chapter 9 . 1/4/2012 I loved every minute of this. Every. Single. Minute. Also, knowing this was the sequel, i read the other one first...loved every minute of that too~~ I love your writing and even though I didn't find this fic in time for the vote, I'm glad you posted both. I love when one of them dies (so I'll inform you know that i would have voted for him dying), i think it just adds more to the story so I enjoyed reading, and bawling my eyes out lol. The chapter of their wedding, you had me going, I started crying as soon as you switched back out of Goku's POV. I thought he was dead. But anyway, once again amazing work and be prepared for me to go through and read your other KHR stories and most likely comment and add them to favorites. I can't get enough! |
PierrotToTheShadows chapter 9 . 12/3/2011 *This reviewer is currently busy fangirling on her laptop while drooling but she has left a message* How can you write such beauty? I loved the angst mixed in with the fluff and how there were some serious, sad, cry-your-eyes-out-oh-please-survive-Gokudera moments yet some lol-oh-Dino-you-so-funny moments as well. I'm off to fav this now! Thanks for writing this :) |
DevilishBea chapter 9 . 10/14/2011 omg! so cute! I wonder if Squalo is going to be drunk again :) I bet Gokudera is going to be a blushing bride with this vow! |
freakyfangirl chapter 8 . 10/12/2011 my god, you actually killed ALL THREE OF THEM? some angst for sure |
AdaraLove chapter 9 . 10/12/2011 This chapter was so hilarious! I loved all of Squalo's parts XD. I also laughed when Yamamoto just copied everything word for word out of the dictionary. Oh Yama, that's not how you do it but it was cute of him for trying lol. |
G.Storm59 chapter 9 . 10/12/2011 Oho, Gokudera, getting a little imaptient are we? *wiggles eyebrows* That was so cute! I couldn't stop laughing at the "XANXUS U ANUS Y U NO LOVE ME?" even though I don't even like that pairing! xD Can't wait to read your next story! :D I wish you luck in your fluff and lime~ ;) |
Crazy4animeCouples chapter 9 . 10/11/2011 Lmfao that was a brilliant way to end this fic *giglez* |
Magami Yuuri chapter 8 . 10/10/2011 Hehe, I'm sorry, I really waited for you to post all the seven chapters xD (but you wouldn't add the "complete" status, so I waited some more) When I opened the first chapter page some time ago and read until the DAMN ARTERY I stopped. In truth, I had to stop. Seven Days to Fall In Love almost killed me and to know that Gokudera was once again in the hospital because of that DAMN incident made my heart stop, I couldn't take it xD Then, today I decided I was going to be tough and bear whatever you had written even if it wasn't finished XDDD While I trembled desperatly hitting the "next" button every time I ended reading a chapter, I would close my eyes and whisper almost like praying: "Please, don't kill him. Don't let Yamamoto alone. Please, please, please" and I'm not exaggerating, I was really like that XD I cried, I gasped, I thought I was going to pass out XDDDD I couldn't read your author comments any further after the third chapter, I felt if you said they would suffer any longer I wouldn't have the courage to read it all (but I read all of them after finishing)... and WORST OF ALL: if Gokudera died because I didn't vote(meaning: I didn't start reading it before) I would NEVER EVER forgive myself (yes, I was this involved with the story). I'm terribly sensitive these days haha XD That's why I thought I couldn't read it But, I finally did it! After tears and sobs and chest pangs XDDDD (oh, drama...) Like I said before xD it's just too good to see all my favorite pairings together *-* I need to do that more myself haha And, as always, you write angst wonderfully xD I need to get back to that track too, it's been some time since I last wrote that genre. And your fluffy is... how should I put this...? It kills... so badly. It hurts so much. Almost even more than the angst. Like "lalala, I'm sooo happy" and then 'bang', no no no, you're not that happily-ever-after :D It's... it's... the eye of the hurricane! That place where the wind is not blowing, the place where you find rest in a storm, but you know, YOU JUST KNOW it... the nightmare is not over... it's all around you. CRAP XD I hate you~! But I LOVE YOU~! Yeah, sorry. That's how angstfluffy makes me feel XD I think it's the two genres I love the most though, haha~ xD (yes, I am this contradictious) And I'm satisfied you wrote both endings XD In fact, if I had voted I would probably vote for that. So, let's end this. Sorry I talk too much XD I am glad I read this story! It's awesome Keep up with the good work o/~ |
AdaraLove chapter 8 . 10/10/2011 Oh gosh that was so flipping depressing I bawled by eyes out like a baby! lol, it was beautifully written and so tragic that I can't wait for the humorous chapter you promised us next! I need some sunshine after this chapter lol |
DevilishBea chapter 8 . 10/9/2011 that was sooo sad! I must say that I was prepared for such ending, but I still ended up crying! |
Crazy4animeCouples chapter 8 . 10/9/2011 I'm not going to lie... I totally just cried! ;3; that was horribly cruel u know! I liked the first ending better! |