I would love to see more on this story.

Very confusing at some points and slightly humorous. Do hope they work things out.

Wow, a really interesting story. I have always loved the Myka/H.G. interaction, and you capture it perfectly. I hope we get to see more of this. :)

Good luck with the writing

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This was so great. I would totally be okay with a sequel. Xx

That was hilarious! I loved it! I especially loved all Pete's cute little says. Poke Ball! That one really got me. :)

I loved it.

:) Liking the story.

I'm confused by one little part.

When you said "The End" what did you mean?

Because you certainly can't mean that you won't continue the story can you?

Seriously? ;)

You should totally make a smut out of thiss! Love it, love it, love it! )

This was awesome!

And it makes so much sense as well.

Flawless :D