| Reviews for Mother |
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   Denisse624 chapter 12 . 7/13 Does the one who adopted the story, still have the same username and has the book the same tittle? |
| Denisse624 chapter 9 . 7/13 OMG i can't stop laughing at this chapter |
| Denisse624 chapter 6 . 7/13 Ohh Luna you just had to do it |
| cheyanne.savoy7m chapter 4 . 9/17/2019 Ace |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2019 Uhm... there are multiple womens on Whitebeards ship... |
| kmf1234 chapter 3 . 11/25/2018 whitebeard |
| Julietterose4901 chapter 1 . 2/15/2018 Nice |
| j.mhollamen chapter 7 . 1/24/2018 crap grammar, friggin great storie |
| Carol542 chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 love it |
| Monster King chapter 12 . 11/8/2017 Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story. |
| Lucille chapter 3 . 8/24/2017 Honestly, I was hoping for a Whitebeard/Harry pairing when I decided to read this but seeing as she's 16 and Edward's pretty old, that is pretty unlikely. It'd have been okay if the others were younger than her but that isn't the case. I was expecting her to be older when she got to the OP universe ahaha. The title had me assume that she'll be called mother by the crew and i don't think grown men would seriously call her that when she's only 16 years of age. The fact that there's a poll for who to pair her with is kinda... and to possibly pair her with Ace? If it so happens that she's called mother by the time Ace joins, it's kinda awkward don't you think? |
| Elfin69 chapter 10 . 9/29/2016 Looks like Fate changed her into a Siren instead of magical. I cannot wait until she is fully trained. |
| Elfin69 chapter 9 . 9/29/2016 Oops, now they are all in trouble. How hard is it to just clean up after themselves? |
| Elfin69 chapter 8 . 9/29/2016 Don't blame her for fainting. Will anyone have a chance to catch her and what is with the new person Teech |
| Elfin69 chapter 7 . 9/29/2016 How has anyone seen what she looks like if she has spent most of her time on the Moby Dick? |
