Elves sleep with their eyes open unless injured or really tired. Just saying. sorry if my corrections bother you. it really is a good story.

I'm Wingbeats on the Wind.

That was an amazing story. I saw a few grammatical errors here and there, but other then that it was really good. You completely captured the characters perfectly. Legolas is one of my favorite characters!

Excellent chapter, really creepy!

too lazy to log in lol. what a unique story! i think a sequel of the arrow finally being handed back to the original prince would be good ;) haha. well done, amazing story :)

I love this story. the first sentence reminds me of a song, that starts like that. I think you can write some more about this. greetz. Alexine

Ooh! I love it! Your style of writing is really beautiful. :D

Beautiful style of writing!

I like :D

dat is echt 1 van myn favoriete verhaaltjes. zo mooi! ik kijk al uit nr je volgende verhaaltjes;)

I love the way you write, you are one of the only people who can bring me in the world of elves like it is ours, like it is normal. I hope you keep writing and everyone can enjoy the pure magic of your beautiful words. Keep up the good work!

Glenn