add the new ones onto this one!

NOOOOOO! THERE'S NO MORE CHAPTERS FOR ME TO READ AND ENJOY; WORSE STILL, THE STORY ITSELF IS INCOMPLETE! DX

I hope someday you'll return and finish this story. It's awesome, and I'd hate for it to be one of those dreaded 'permanently abandoned/incomplete' fics.

Pkease tell me he lives!

Love your story, I can't wait.

Well that is an interesting turn of events, isn't it? Haha I like the twist as well!

So, since Jenner and Justin are brothers, does that mean that Isabel is capable of having a connection with the evil one as well?

I hope that Justin is able to get him and Rossa out of this bind and that together they can head back. And that his cousin can come to help them out as soon as possible!

I like the explanation you did as well with Justin's parents having been experimented on and he being the castaway runt, real character development that I am enjoying!

Can't wait for more!

Oh no, poor Timmy! I cannot believe that this is happening to the poor kid and he has still yet to have his mother come back to him too! I hope that Martin and the gang find a way to save him, hopefully Carlos will come up with a plan

Crap, I thought they were freed...I guess not.

Wow, Jace is a total creep! Poor Timmy! I hope that Martin or Teresa finds him in the act so that they can take the sick rat down.

As for Justin and Rossa. She's totally preggo eggo, I am calling that now. I can't believe they've been caught again though, that is so frustrating!

I can't wait for more! I love this story so far.

Fairfarren

Lydia

This is quite a turn of events!

Also I am just confused about one thing- I thought you said something about Justin getting injections at NIMH but now he is a second generationer...so does this mean that he was born at NIMH and furhter experimented on?

It's probably me just over thinking but I may have read something wrong as well.

Two chapters left, I hope you keep updating!

Fairfarren,

Lydia

I like the way you had Jonathan choose the names and the fact that Mrs. Brisby never had one because she wasn't an educated mouse. It was a nice touch and makes a lot of sense. I also like the name you had Justin pick out for her.

This story is really intense and I am eager to find out what Jenner's plan is. Hopefully Justin and Rossa can beat him again!

Onto ch. 6!

Fairfarren,

Lydia

Soooo I am glad that I found your fict today! I rewatched the movie and my Justin/Brisby shipping feels came back.

Speaking of feels I absolutely adore what Isabella said about feelings! It's so true and you phrased it well.

I am enjoying the story development, it is a very equal pace and I do not feel rushed as a reader. Justin's hesitance at accepting his feelings toward Mrs. Brisby is nice as well.

Can't wait to read on,

Fairfarren,

Lydia

I love this story. Your writing is so intense! I can't for another update. Keep up the good work!

Holy shit! That nightmare scene brought back memories from when I saw some of the horror films they had back in the 80's. Damn, did they have some scary shit then!

I'd have to say you captured slot of feeling into that horrific scene there! O-o

This is turning out to be quite chilling and exciting, please continue! :D