:) Yay, James and Lily! Loved it.

So adorable! I love it!

Absolutly adorable! Love the story!

Apparently this Christmas is all about you breaking my heart with your wonderful writing. MAH CREYS.

'her whole body alight like James lit a match underneath her, hot like Fiendfyre in all its dangerous intensity.'

That was damn sexy of you.

"Potter is Hotter"-very clever, nice work.

wah! really nice :P

WOOOOOT! This was awesome! Loved it! James sounds amazing :)

LOVE IT just the right balance of being adorable and something more without being too much :)

"the sign that Mary made for her though, half joking but mostly-serious, Potter is Hotter printed across the fabric in painstaking letters" - The wording on the sign made me smile.

don't go showing me up with your better use of collaquisms and grammar." - "colloquialisms".

I really like it!

Another brilliant story! Damn, you are good! Love "both of them wanting answers to questions they didn't always know how to ask". Very true and nicely put! :DDD

I loved it.

The characterisation of Lily and James is just beautiful, and you portray them both perfectly.

Beautifully written as well. And I was in need of some good fluff :)

-xSymnia