There honestly aren't enough fanfics where ANYBODY eats the Yami Yami no Mi in place of Blackbeard (don't get me wrong, fanstastic villain; but we've just seen so LITTLE of the big bastard), so I'm thrilled to find one.

And Naruto of all people eating it? That's perfect. It's a nice throwback to the Kyuubi's power, it's about as feared and it allows Naruto to actually have a reasonably explained dark side and that's pretty fucking cool. I'll admit I don't understand Naruto still having slitted crimson eyes without the Kyuubi (if anything, you'd think his eyes would just be fathomless black pits), but that's hardly a gamebreaker for a story that seems pretty good so far.

Hope to see more of this!

I really hope naruto becomes evil there are very few evil naruto in one piece stories.

lol, it's always entertaining when i saw retarded coward raging jn all of your story comment page

Realllllly goood I cant wait for the next chapter

Your jokes are worse than the idiots who run your sorry ass Nazi country. You all deserve to burn.

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I really hope naruto ends up evil there are very few one piece stories with an evil naruto.

So far it has some serious potential, I can't wait to see where you take it.

Cool story bro, hope ya continue! Ignore the ironic comment below mine. Not worth the brain cells.

No really, go fucking die you sick fucking animal.

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Love the story!

Hum having a White-beard pirate Naruto clearing the way for Luffy seems to be a little overkill, but hey, it's original at the very least.

Im not much of a One Piece fan. But this is quality work my dude.

Hum... am i the only one bothered by the fact that if Teach is gone or missing then it means he probably is hiding somewhere in " Leaf Island " ? You know, the place of the guy that fouled his plan and stole the fruit he tried to find for several decades!

This island is basically doomed if he is still alive.

Well THAT quote/unquote "fight" with Kuro lasted as long as I thought it would. As for Syrup Island being under the protection of the Whitebeard Pirates, if enough of the islands in the East Blue become like that, will the Marines become completely outmoded in that section of the world?
As for Gin being bribed with food, good writing!
The Arlong Arc should be interesting, though I wonder whether Naruto clearing the way will be to Luffy's benefit, or detriment.
Looking forward to more.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE SUPPORT!

It keeps me writing and inspired.

Bless you all!

Warm regards,

~Nz