Sweet

BLESS THIS. Oh my God I read this and I was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO tempted to use the same idea of 'who is the better lover' for my own multi-chapter fic (co-incidentally called 'Our Little Secret' !), but eh that's unethical so I won't do that lol. This is absolutely perfect in every way literally omg beautiful beautiful beautiful.
I LOVE THIS SO MUHUHUHUHUHUCH *tears of joy*

This was written very well! Good job!

Loved it! I love this pairing

i really like the whole "clandestine lovers thing", really suits them!
nice story!

Really like this!

Great fanfiction !

You write very well ! And I like your Loki and your Sif.

Thanks from France !

I really enjoyed your story! My only issue, and it is really minor, was the line below.

' "Did you enjoy yourself, Lady Sif?" he asked as he sipped his wine lazily. The red juice of it lined his lips and Sif desperately wished to kiss him then, to taste the mead and him at the same time. '

Mead is a honey wine, not grape wine, and wouldn't stain your lips red.

this was good, very nice

I know this has been posted for a while, but I just found it. :) And I'm very glad that I did. Well done.

-Melodist

I loved this!