I’m convinced that you’re not a fan of Sakura. This was definitely written by someone that wants to make everyone that reads this story deeply hate Sakura. It’s as if every single character flaw of hers was amplified to the point where she seem like a character on a tacky reality show. And her obvious favoritism to Jiro? My goodness. The reason people admire anime characters so much is their strength to endure tough situations and maintain their unyielding morals and values unlike so many humans. The REAL Sakura would love both her babies unconditionally. Especially since she “loved” cold, heartless bastards such as Neji and Sasuke. But to act so coldly to a child she almost died giving birth to that’s not even one yet? I’m not sure how old you were when you wrote this but the lack of real world experience shows. I understand it’s an AU but if you wanted to place them in real world situations then make it realistic. Imagine if every person that had unprotected sex had a child in real life? Or the fact that lack of consent for males is ok in your real world apparently (and I guarantee you’re an advocate for equal rights). Since it hasn’t been updated in 4 years I can only relish in the fact that means you’ve discontinued the story. Stick to writing your other fics. They’re really good. But this one? Had so much potential but missed the mark completely.

It's irritating, to be honest. The ups and downs. The way you wrote it and described everyhting on the other hand is exceptional and really good.

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Bruh what a roller coaster. rip Neji, he were a decent guy, hope he finds peace in the afterlife. (actually not sure if he's dead. yet.)

please finish this up..

wow ... amazing story! I’m sooooo following u

Excellent start

I tried to take a break from reading your other stories since it has been so long since an update but I couldn't stop myself no matter how hard I tried. This one is a cannon i never expected to like but fell in love with and I know he has been a complete and utter ass to her but I know she still has him in her heart no matter how hard she fights it. He just needs to realize that you never really let go of your first love, the feelings may die down a lot and you may move one but there will always be that soft spot for them in your heart. I hope after this she truly realizes how he feels for her and I also hope...that no one in the story has anything to deal with cars again but this is too much to handle. I also forgot Naruto was even in this story and the fact that he refers to the twins as androids is hilarious but now I wonder if he heard the commotion outside and goes to help them but then who is going to watch the twins? I don't want them to see their dad like that because kids in pain breaks my heart like no other. Anyway sorry for my rant but this is another story that I will sit and wait for an update on no matter how long it takes!

Uhmm, Sakura is totally irrational and immature. She never learnt from her mistake not to get awfully drunk and not using protection. She should have thought of it. And resorting to sex as to be close to her husband is a weak and lame foundation to start with in every relationship. Thats like a common rule in relationship isn’t. So her trying to get her husband into bed with her being drunk is kinda lame and cliche. And considering that she wan so imprudent that she did it again (drunken sex) without thinking of the consequences. They are in a 5 yrs contract so she should not expect anything from her husband at all. She agreed to it, so getting closer to her husband is like a suicide. She is an emotionally unstable wreck. Dimwit if u ask me. I understand Neji’s perception at some point. Sakura is so annoying in every chap i wish she just died and leave Neji with the twins. Who gets drunk and goes home 2am considering ur married? She expected a lot in their contractual marriage that she agreed in the first place, and when she can’t handle it, she backs out. Fool like always

Well i was seriously contemplating whether i should continue reading this or not. Sakura seems like a sexually hormonal frustrated teenager whoring her way into Neji. And pls don’t say its the vodka. Its too slutty. Playing hard to get but then getting all touchy. Its irritating to read in every chapter

I’m addicted. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, VERY SOON. We’re desperate. I’m desperate. Please

Well, I honestly hope that Neji wouldn't end up dead. I love him too much for that. Then there is Sakura I can empathize with her but that doesn't mean that the change in her character with too fast and too drastic for my liking plus sometimes I feel like she is acting like a total pitch.
Great story though and I hope that you will continue writing.

I’m just here to let you know that I am still rereading this story and STILL crying at all the horrible parts. Taro and Jiro give me baby fever and I DREAM of long haired hyuuga look alike men. Just kill me off already.

loved it so few neji-sakura stories please update 3

NOOOOOOOOOO, I've finally come back hoping this was completed, even have a new account now, you can't possibly leave it at such a cliff hanger.