Great story so far

I wonder the same thing about that dumb bitch’s name.

You’re not James Bond man.

Seriously, just let him leave the ship..

This is one of the best mass effect fanfictions I have eve read

I enjoyed this idea for a story.

You are a great author, and because I've been waiting for more revised chapters on the reworked version of this story, I've just noticed how far you've come. Keep it up.

-Some guy who never reviews.

For the record, I thought this version of your story was just fine... Sure, 'Jason's' antics hurt my head, but I would have very much preferred it if you went ahead and started up either ME1.5 or ME2 events. Reason why is because (it might just be me) I do not enjoy completely re-reading a story that took about 2.5 years to write and is 81 chapters long. No matter how fast you update the new version, I still get the gist of the story, and we readers have to wait for the next chronological step in your to-be series.

I guess I can just be impatient; I don't particularly enjoy long update periods. I guess that's why I'm following about 25 stories so I don't get bored, huh.

Anyways, I'll keep your new version in mind just in case it's actually better than the original (same plot or not?).

Anyways, it was a great read, in my opinion. I've noticed it for months now, but I've only now started to read it 2 days ago because I ran out of interesting material with/possessing good reviews/short updates/20 chapters already complete.

Anyways, let me know when you plan on getting started on 1.5, I'm sure to follow when that starts up.

Laters. :P

man i would've loved the ME2 part of this but its not my decision but i'll still say it deserves a a billion

I think I speak not only for myself, but others too,in that I think that you should get on with writing the Damon sequel! You finished this story over half a year ago, and far as I'm concerned, you've done nothing except redo something Gibraltar done, and resting on your laurels. I liked this version, except for the immature pc, oceans I'm not sure I'm too bothered to read a reskin of it.

So, what are you still here for? Don't you want to know what happens? *Insert Shameless Self Promotion Here.*

No, not really. Goodbye now.

Still here, and flipping over to the new version.

just read though the whole thing non stop... just post the epialog please

I seem to be one of the few that actually liked the original story. In saying that, I think the updated ones should have been made as a separate updated version.
I hope there is an ME2 sequel to this one
I love your writing all the same, keep it up

It might be better to replace the chapters that already exist. I myself planned on rereading them all anyway, so it might be a bit biased.