Reviews for Pack Mentality
Eunice Pacheco chapter 11 . 3/29
Not sure if I left a review before, but it's been a long time since the story has been updated and have been waiting on my aft to see the revival of the lovely wolfbots
Mysine chapter 11 . 8/4/2019
Oh please update as soon as possible. You have me at the edge of my seat now.
Proud Standards chapter 11 . 4/26/2019
HOLY WACKAMOLLY! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG FOR MORE OF THIS BOOK! AAAH! IT WAS SO RELIEVING TO READ THESE NEW CHAPTERS! GOSH! THAT WAS A WILD RIDE AND THE STORY JUST BENT IN HALF ON A WHOLE NEW LEVEL! SO AWESOME!
Sigh-Ah chapter 10 . 4/22/2019
Im very glad i got to see more of this story. I feared it may have been 'done'.
I love the characters as you've portrayed them, the plot, the description... i love it all! The creativity, time and patience is clear, as well as your frustrations at some points. Im glad you finished the chapters so well after 'the block'set it. Some never crawl out of it once they're in.
Originally, I had fingers crossed that jazz would be mauled by prowl while 'feral' and that somehow made it capable of turning him into one of them.
I NEVER saw him being a kitty kitty as an option!
Im not trying to sound stalker(ish) but ive followed all you TF storied and loved the care and detail in them all. I especially loved 'the Cure' i know its finished and that's alright, i had hoped they'd have sparklings and some drama around that, but its alright. It was an awesome story regardless.
'Flight of a seeker bee' is also a wonderful twist and more comedy in parts that may not have been completely intentional.
Your a writer who writes fan fictions and for that i am eternally grateful for, but i also see great promise as a possible future writer! If you go big with your own book, hit me up! Id love to read an original from you!
Its officially 1:20 and i started the moment it was posted. Granted i have chores and work to do but i finally finished and dont regret ANYTHING!
I again cannot voice my previous concern that this may have been dead. Im so very glad its still kicking!
I know you have a life so i wish you the best for the days and more to come, be safe and hope beyond hope, to see the next chapter soon! 3
Proud Standards chapter 6 . 9/2/2018
OH BOY I HOPE TO READ MORE IF THIS BOOK!
I've reread this story like 2 or 3 times already. This is getting so good!
Everytime I finish I have been making up scenes of what might happen! And mostly! I've been imagining: what if Jazz finds a Mechalycan and got lose from the chains and bites Jazz? What if he too turns into one of those? What would happen if the plan doesn't work? What if Thunderwing knew what was going on and was acting like he was clueless? So many WHAT IFs! Anything could happen! This story just keeps me guessing a lot! :D
Lucky Bee-otch chapter 7 . 1/24/2018
Damnit this is good! Please continue it!
Optimus Bob chapter 7 . 3/30/2017
Oops posted anonymously. I love this story! Looking forward to more. I hope Jazz's plan works :D 3
Guest chapter 7 . 3/30/2017
I love this story!
Renee werewolf chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
YAY! Was worried this story was dead. Every time I read it I kept coming up with different endings, one of which was Jazz finding out Thunderwing was abusing Prowl. Can't wait for more chapters.
gummibear78906 chapter 7 . 3/27/2017
love the new chapters cant wait for more!
GiJane431 chapter 5 . 2/21/2017
I had forgotten how much I loved this until I had seen it had been updated. Amazing. Especially the jazz\prowl scene. Love it.
FatesShadow83 chapter 5 . 2/19/2017
Love this story! Thank you for the double update! :-)
Sigh-ah chapter 5 . 2/1/2017
I want prowl to spark jazz so bad! a hybrid! gaaaaah! I want them to have a sparkling! please please please please let them have a baby! That would be so adorable! an accuse tap sparkling that no one would exspect!
*cries*
then the question would be, what to name the sparkling?!
gah, im fangirling and my service dog thinks I'm having a seizure cause I'm squealing lol!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/1/2017
Woo! I thought this was a dead fic! Nice to see it update again. I can't wait to see the smuggling party.
Dark Reika chapter 3 . 5/3/2014
I truly LOVE your story it's so interesting! oo
Please update soon again *begs you*
It would be such a shame if it gets forgotten! .

Reika
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