this is so domestic i want to cryso cute!

2uper great endiing ii really like iit great job

Bravo! Beautiful! How can this NOT get many reviews? It's bloody awesome! Just the right amount of fluff, angst, and drama! I loved it, please write a sequel! :D

I read this story more than a year ago and I liked it. Recently, I found it again and I'm so glad! It's one of few good fanfictions on this site. Thanks for writing and sharing.

This story was FAN-tastic!

Awwwww poor renji but I know butt smex is COMMING so...nothing to do here

LAWD JESUS I CAN FEEL THE BOOD COMMIN ON! This chapter gets me so excited! Keep writing Becuz this is my third time reading it cuz it's so good. So hahaha be your just that awesome you need to make a sequel

This was just PERFECT! I LOVED IT!

You are such a talented writer! Sorry I didn't review all the other chapters, I really really wanted to finish reading the story! It was that good!

Thank you for an amazing story!

Love,

チョッパーくん

Hey! haha ive red thi story for a billion time because the story of it is soooo cuuteee
and anyways ive just noticed that you made Renji a bit weak and no offence kay? so yah thats all i gota say ;3 i reallly love yar story duddette

this is the sweetest ByaxRen fic i've ever read so far...love it :)

This is the best fanfiction I've ever read in my life... You're amazing :)

Adorable. You're a talented writter, keep it up.

This was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing it..

I'm almost cryingggg ! It's really romanticcccc !

"Yeah, we are. I'm from Rukongai, you were born into Nobility. I'm passionate, you're unruffled. I'm hot-headed, you're composed. I'm red, you're black."

That line literally made me want to vomit. It worked as a discription, NOT as an acctual line.

At least the rest of the story is good. Good job.