It's a really cute fanfic
So beatifull
Thank you for it

This was beautiful, thank you.

I wanted to hug them both so much, but they were doing their best as it was with picking up the fallen shards of themselves and beginning the process of healing. There is no greater intimacy than shared pain, because just like love, pain is universal, but all the more private and precious by nature.

'and it kind of makes Nezumi's heart want to explode' - hnng love this line. I feel so fuzzy and warm and just. /heart

Finally! Gosh, I didn't know finding a story with a believable Shion/Nezumi would be this hard. Geez. Most authors are just shoving them into the roles of a ideal seme and uke, and not thinking all that much about their actual character at all.

I LOVE the balance here. It doesn't feel like a one-sided relationship at all ( I have stumbled on quite a few that does). What I mean by this, is how Shion is put on a pedestal while Nezumi cater to him. A lot of authors forget that is isn't about who is uke and who is not, or who is seme and who is not. Nezumi and Shion are so much more then that, and is rather depressing that most of the stories on here doesn't show that all.

This one is 1 out of 10. They are actual equal's in here. I am glad that it isn't completely hopeless.

How do they always end up in bed? Simple. Because not only is it the sexiest place to be, but there's something about being able to snuggle under warm sheets. It gives people an excuse to wrap themselves around each other and relax. To just be.
And when you go to sleep, thus rendering yourself unaware and unconscious, its something fuzzy to know that that person next to you is the last sensation you'll feel, and, most likely, the first thing you'll know when you start a new day of life.

A challenge! Alas! *grabs shovel* Let's go! This is war!

*cough* Uh, anyway, sup? I don't know why they always end up in bed but I doubt they mind very much. XD So this a whole bunch of awesome. As much as Nezumi angsts, we never really SEE him angsting too much, so this was exactly what I have been looking for, for a while! Thank you and brilliant job!

Sweet and angsty, but great resolution. I'm secretly sort of happy that this didnt end in an M rated fashion.

THIS right here should have been the ending, this is freaking PERFECT and I love it! You are a genius and I love you and your stories :D 3

This was wonderful, and exactly the kind of fluff I needed after rewatching that ending. Gawsh. I don't even know what to do with all my squee.

Awww I loved it, although I liked the series ending too. :) And I will happily join your side in that shovel battle if you need any help

Awww I loved it, although I liked the series ending too. :) And I will happily join your side in that shovel battle if you need any help

YES, I Do wonder why they ended up in bed together.. The scence is sweet but it kinda makes me think of them as lovers- I don't want to think of them as lovers, but very close friends. But somehow the scene was... . made it look like they were! Other than that, I love the alternate ending and Nezumi's breakdown. He had never cried nor showed his true feelings. The poor boy has gone through a lot! Love it lots. Thank you so much!

I love it! Sweet, bittersweet, and just... right!

lol u NEED to make chappie 2 otherwise I'll take ur offer on the shovel *shot*

amazing one, chara's were IC and omg Nezumi! ;_;

keep up the good work xD