Beautiful no one really sees the beauty in that kind of coupling but you wrote it perfectly that is a true rendering of what Harry and stacks relationship would be like thank you

Lol this was a lot better than my first sex scene xD

Reading this, I cant really tell that this is your first sex scene. I did an amazing job.

I love Dom Harry!

Your first one? UNBELIEVABLE! That was too good to be your first one!

You're right about Ron being the sole reason that Drarry isn't canon! How dare he laugh at Draco's name!
I loved Draco being insecure
The sex scene was so hot, and so emotional, I kinda actually started crying a bit

Wow... that was... that could not have been your first sex scene! That was AWESOME! Do you think you would be able to write this story in Harry's perspective? That would be so cool! Amazing job on this, by the way!

Armelia1989

A I love dominat(and jealous)Harry, jealous, stuttering Draco, Blaise's attraction to Draco,and Draco's "school girl w/ a crush " side.

Eh?! Really? That's amazing for your first sex scene!

What do you think would've happened if Ronny-kins walked in on them, hm?

wow

Terrific story. I loved it.

This was really good, Blaise annoyed me though, so did Ginny. And for future reference Weasley, is spelled just how I spelled it.

draco...was a jerk in the end...and didnt say i love you too..I NO LIKE THAT :

You did a great sex scene no worries! I love Draco all insecure and jealous heh this made me smile thank you so much. Keep these fics coming.