for a shadamy story, this actually looks pretty good so far. keep it up.

Hope u continue story luv it :)

I have searched through and through the shadamy category and now my search will not have to continue! I've missed this and now i will be putting details of my character PROPERLY!

Old me: Sorry...

New me: I am more mature and more detailed in my reviews!

Name: Twilight Marcella Wolf.

Age: (turning 19 next month)

BD: 3/21/11.

Height: 3'9"

Feature(s): slick jet black fur and hair(hair with cobalt blue highlights), right eye(dark blue, with slick black scar vertically across), left eye(dark red), waist length hair and shoulder length bangs covering left eye, muzzle like Tails and nose like Knuckles, eye form similar to Shadow's, and tail is about 3-4 feet in length(kinda bushy).

Voice: Deep but smooth and feminine.

Personality: Shadow(about 50% of the time she's like him, quiet and grouchy), Amy(10% happy and ready to pown), Tails(5% is intelligent and able to name any substance in elements, but is also good with weaponry), and Knuckles(5% short tempered).

Favorite Food(s): Black olives and Lasagna.

Weapon(s): Multi-purpose Morphing Scythe(it's like a birth stone).

Favorite Weapon(s): Claws and teeth.

Thanks if you say yes! blegh if you say no! Lol!

Sincerely,

*.:Twilight the Wolf:.*

This is a awesome story! Hope you continue it soon! ;D

I suppose this is an improper reaction, but I find it rather relieving to see someone else in the same boat. My works too have slowed up considerably (not to mention the deletion they suffered -and "lived" through- :\). That said, I believe taking a break from FFN altogether is mandatory from time to time, or even just a shift in project focus, as in your case. Though it's been a while, know that I'm still following this and looking forward to your next update. Nice to hear from you again at any rate :)

Until next time!

This is a really good fic, I really want to know what's happening with Sonic! Update soon please.

this story is so touching and meaningful Please whatever you do don't drop this story!

Sorry it took me some time. But you knew I'd get to this sooner or later, right? No? Ah...ya hurt my feelin's.

Alright I'll stop messing around and review. Hmm...yes beautifully detailed descriptive prose. And the tiny bit of verse at the starts sets the chapter off very nicely. The confusingly intertwined halls, void of any type of machine or sign of life, make even the reader's head spin (in a good way XD).

And now we see Metal, looking and acting too 'real' for his own good. In making him like this, you've left a lingering doubt in the reader's mind, as to which one of these hedgehog's was truly responsible for Amy's condition (though the facts do still weigh against the real Sonic, there's always room for a twist). The sudden appearance of his dark side is making matters more uneasy for the hero. Hopefully he'll learn to control his evilness.

Shadow's going to have a hard time reaching Amy; given how strong his facade has grown over the years. This is why you never say things you don't mean/might regret later: They can really come back to bite you in the a**. You've got to give the man credit for trying, but that won't make Amy any less scared of him.

Now we see Amy, reaching for him? Hmm, nice turn of events. I would say this Amy is a much more respectable lady these days. You've done a good job dragging out both sides' apprehension, without infusing excessive amounts of angst (as is so common in Shadamy fics). However, I suppose angst in general just doesn't catch my fancy (or perhaps hurt-comfort), as the ending is what it is, neither my preference nor my peeve. Overall though, you've convinced me to work more with Shadow in the future (perhaps in a one-shot, what do you think).

You did far above and beyond with this chapter's 'life-like' feel. I give this, for both persuading me and holding my interest, a 9.4/10 (if you don't mind me rating this).

Excellent work! Please update as swiftly as possible!

dude, this... its amazing. you have the most amazing ability of putting true emotion in your words. keep it up bro keep it up.

Awwh! Such an emotional and tense chapter!

Great work and wonderful emotion

O...M...G...THISISSOAWESOMEICAN'TBELIVETHATNOONEHASREVIEWED *gets brick'd*

Sorry about that, but WOW! I never expected SHADOW, of ALL the characters in this story, to break down like that: you sir, are an EPIC writer!

God Bless,

Jerry

Too bad Amy is in a terrible state of mind. I love how you've combined a fresh roller-coaster of emotions in this chap, starting with a bit of light humor on the surface, but swiftly diving into a valley of distress. Regarding Amy’s reaction to fox-boy’s ‘help’, that’s just the kind of thing I could see Tails doing: Trying to be a nice guy, only to speak too much for his own good and foul up things by accident :(.

Sonic is succumbing to his darker self. I guess this is the case because the first fic I wrote (it no longer exists unfortunately) drew upon a similar style to depict his gradual descent into darkness. Oh I'm certain you'll be throwing more than a couple of curve-balls at me and the rest of your audience, like any good writer knows to do, but I have my own thoughts on where this is headed (only time will tell if I'm right XD).

Rouge has the right of it; Shadow needs to get over his angst so he can help Amy with hers. Naturally this is an essential in the whole 'love someone more than you do yourself' formula, not that Shadow couldn't use an attitude adjustment anyway XD. I doubt you've read my fic 'Rise', but your Shadow is starting to sound a bit like my Metal in his quest for 'emotional awareness' (I mean that in a good way).

You've so far started to make me like Shadow's character (NOW look what you've done!) more than I ever used to. It's good to broaden one's, ahem, 'horizons' wouldn't you say?

I look forward to the next chapter!

Descriptive writing is most certainly your strong point. Sadly I have/had the opposite problem, as I do so love my dialogue :)

Back to the chapter. Well it wouldn't the first time Sonic was caught in a rather hairy pickle (quite the mental concept, no? XD), still I can't say getting himself into more danger will be healthy for his future issues. Come to think of it, I doubt the spiny hero will much enjoy the thought of Shadow moving in on Amy (come on, we all know it'll happen sooner or later). Who knows? Maybe this whole ordeal will result in an epic battle for Amy's affections, between none other than Shadow and Eggman (yes I said Eggman! No correction required XD)!

Shadow still can't let the past be. Welp, at least we know he's very IC, at least thus far. I can't say I found any real surprises with his inner thoughts (Amy WAS, after all, the one that reminded him of Maria in SA2B), though I suppose a logical foundation is healthy place to start any romance. I personally liked the scene where he smacked the wall, uncaring if others though him insane for it. Such a scene paints his angst in vivid, but not overdone, light.

I personally suggest fluidly combining your regular prose and dialogue. A solid display of facial and other body language, instead of just telling ‘us’ what they’re thinking, can be more impacting on us readers, as we are required to 'guess' what’s going through the speaker’s mind. Describing everything is good most times, but taking my suggestion into account would allow readers to feel like they are actually 'hearing and seeing' the characters talk. It's not that you don't do just that already, but I would love to see more of it!

Superb chapter. Sorry for my busy lateness :\

When will Amy learn that Shadow Creepers always try to invade your mind-Oh wait...wrong game XD. So, Sonic is showing his darker side is he? Or maybe he's just a bit stressed is all (way to lay it to rest Tails...NOT). Shadow does mean well, but surely he understands how much his words grate the nerves of others around him. You're right, he is acting a little OOC, but hey you want a romance with Shadow or what? ... Right, that didn't come out well did it?

Ahem! In any case, I'm most pleased with the descriptive portions of this chapter. Sounds and feels like you belong in the places they're visiting (such as the hospital setting). Sort of hits home as I've sat through such things aplenty.

Heh, an amethyst necklace huh? Even though I'm a guy, I confess that amethyst is my favorite gemstone. In my mind, it's what best describes humble beauty (as it is only semi-precious, but every bit as wonderful as emerald, sapphire, etc.).

Eh, sorry for the tangent. Anyways, so Shadow has decided to take her in has he? I wonder what sort of home he has, but then that’s hardly the biggest question of this chapter.

You want errors? YOU WANT ERRORS? Well here ya go! It should be left "duller" and not "more duller". Another possible alternative is "even duller" (it’s good to even avoid things like “even more dull” though I’ve seen it used). There you are! Shame on you for a HUGE gravity-defying, story-mangling, tooth-brushing mistake like THAT!

Ah before I forget. Clever title you have for a tale with some 'survival' themes.

Good good, a master of plot twists I see, though you maybe simply a good first-timer (though I HIGHLY doubt it).

I was correct in assuming that it couldn't be that simple, just having Sonic as the bad guy and Shadow as the big hero. Given your implications this chapter Sonic may indeed still be the culprit, but in his dark form only. Though, as you also implied, Eggman has not been very active lately, hinting to his possible involvement (God knows he has more than enough motive). Whether one of those 'hints' is nothing more than a red herring or both are, in fact, tied to together, remains to be seen. Though if you think about it, having Sonic turn evil for a moment and commit a crime would be the ultimate way to topple him as a rival. Eggman wouldn't even have to dirty his hands on this one, Shadow would be more than willing to do the honors I'm sure.

Though I suppose this could go REALLY haywire, if it turns out that Tails was the big bad wolf (er…fox) all along! Mwahahahaha!

Once again, I talk too much, but that is how I read these things XD. Thanks for the good chap and the brain-teaser!