So... I know it has been over five years and you probably won't even get this review BUT I have really enjoyed these stories you have wrote. A shame this story was abandoned as it was quite the interesting trip you have taken us on up to this point. I haven't beta'd before but on the off chance you come back and finish I would like to offer any help I can give you.

Good series so far. You're on a good roll dealing with butterfly effects and mixing in a bit of fate. I had feared you might take the time travel too far on the science fiction angle, but you've kept it appropriately moderate. Wouldn't feel like Chuck otherwise.

I hope you update soon, because this is truly a unique Chuck fic that deserves a good ending!

Another fun filled chapter. thanks. JT ... don't know much about editing and my spelling skills are atrocious, as my stories constantly showcase, however, SpreadTheNerd was kind enough to look over a few chapters for me and maybe you might ask...all the advice I can offer. Me, I'd just take advantage of the opportunity to read the chapters before anyone else and then offer a big 'neener, neener' to everyone else.

Fun little twisty turns that make for great story telling. Looking forward to the next chapter. JT

Had some time to catch up on some reading and this story's siren song had been calling to me and I finally unlashed myself from the mast and plunged in. Great stroytelling that leaves me looking forward to the next chapter. JT

Nice chapter, interesting you made Heather one of the good guys although she seemed right in character from the show, a real material girl.

I admit I was getting a little lost and confused in the first sequel and just wanted to thank you for that summary which helped a lot. Thanks.

Another fun twist on a fun episode. I definitely didn't see the big twist with Heather coming, poor Sarah, that only makes it worse!

Great chapter. Update soon.

Well, now it's getting kind of twisty. Hope you're keeping good notes on the timelines. Looks like Chuck's alternate timeline knowledge is starting to hit the point of diminishing returns. Good chapter with an interesting twist.

Great chapter...

Oooh, I've *missed* this one so much! Glad to see another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Libby is just like Heather.

Awesome to see a new chapter! I always like this story best when you're twisting around actual episodes; and this was fascinating. We need to know if Libby is just a harmless bimbo, if Heather is still involved from the sidelines, and if Volkoff will tie into this. So much fun.

No Heather but Mark still finds himself in exactly the same position. Nice chapter, looking forward to the reunion

Go Casey and the Montgomery :)

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I'm looking forward to the next one.