i don't care

I think even if Annabeth would cheat, she’d be too smart to get caught. But I love your story!

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why is it underlined i know thats petty but why

Can I try re write this story?

ship percy and apollo pepollo

Hiya! I wanted to ask if I can adopt this fanfiction? I would write the story on wattpad, not here because I haven't got an account yet. I know it's been a while you've started this fanfiction. It's 2016 noe and you wrote it in 2012. Wow. So I'M not sure if you read this comment so I think I'll just start my part. And I'l mention you on wattpad, that it was your story. My name on wp: LiannaFlower

I ducking hetalia this shack and sound like me know when you're enjoying rain English language

Why are they gay

more fluff less drama and make percy immortal would be nice plisss i love happy end

why

ummm... is this story still available for adoption cuz im loving it! it's sad that you are abandoning this story, but i guess it's your choice so i'll respect it. May adopt this story?

I just finished the first chapter, personally I would have gone into a little more detail about how Annabeth was cheating on Percy. This could be just me, but it just sounded like she was outside her apartment and just kissed a random guy. Things like his looks and such would be good in detail. Also, Percy and Annabeth HAVE been through a lot together, so I think that he would be more then just mad. Emotions like, rage, jealously, sorrow, and all that stuff would be good to use. It seems like a good story...I might read more. Good work!

I dunno, but I think that you were going in a great direction. You had a plot, character development, sub plots, all you needed we triangle can be done any one of a million ways. All you needed was a back story and you'dve been set. The love triangle here could have gone a number of ways. Percy could've gotten married in Olympus' first ever gay marriage. They could have set up simple housekeeping in any city on Earth.
Another way might've been a 3-way with Annabeth and then Percy gets with Reyna, leaving Annabeth pregnant with Apollo, but giving birth to a healthy baby who has black hair and sea-green eyes! ORRRR... maybe Annabeth is left with Apollo and Percy goes with Hylla, Reyna's sister, and then Apollo cheats on Annabeth with Percy and Hylla! Or maybe Apollo gets it on with Aphrodite, and Annabeth gets it on with Chiron. See? No end to it all. I think that you just had a slight case of the jitters.

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